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Vivid Armageddon
By WatchTheWorldCollapse
Swallow my brain and tell my memories in the form of a dead time story
forming the led line before me in my dreams i see seas of emptiness
Storming the shore of gory endless means of war, glory means deceased
enemies
trust in death for it is deaf, it can not hear the screams
of sympathy
the lust in sex will rest assured of Armageddon's
symphony
discouraging sounds of burning flesh upon the crust of
the earth
the nourishing ground yearning for fresh blood and all its
worth
"dust in the wind" suffocating the rest of mankind and everything
unique
the rusty hearts defend enough to pressure gods regret to
save the weak
panic speads like plagues upon the sick.
man decends
and flames snuff out our wits
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Copyright 2012 WatchTheWorldCollapse
Author's Note:
im going to come back to this one Later and make it a lot longer. let me know what you think =]Comments on "Vivid Armageddon "
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On Thursday, January 5, 2012, dwells
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wrote:
Last line was a bit of a reach, consider perhaps "Man descends, his death will not be quick" or something similar. Overall quite dark and downcast with a foreboding tone to the narrative. I liked it, thanks!
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A former member wrote:
Nice lines! "trust in death for it is deaf, it can not hear the screams of sympathy" - I especially loved this one, solid write. Bravo.
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