say goodbye

By WatchTheWorldCollapse

 say goodbye
burn your fake smiles
exist with me for a little while
on the shore of desperation
we can relate with what we dont know
say goodbye
to that golden voice
you never really had that much of a choice



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Copyright 2011 WatchTheWorldCollapse
Published on Friday, December 16, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • dwells On Friday, December 16, 2011, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Nice job on this ode to a "down on their luck" vocalist perhaps? Misery loves company, or just sharing pain and failure? Still pondering, thanks.

  • terris crimson On Friday, December 16, 2011, terris crimson (167)By person wrote:

    even though this poem is short, this poem is moving. a well done emotional sweep.

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