Comments by All Members
- "Excellently, excellently constructed; this is powerful and intense, profound and clear. The title is very clever and perfectly chosen, also. Quality stuff."
Posted by purr_verse on "Little In Discretion" by Drifter
- "I like this. It's fast and doesn't fuck around with the point. It's not condeming just...laying it out. Yeah, this is something to come back to. "
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "911" by Drifter
- "Thats a powerful message your sending out there, and all the power in the world to ya, but there's a danger and sickness in forcing men, and women, to die for something they don't believe in. "
Posted by Unknown on "Ultimatum by Association" by Drifter
- "Liked the anology to the afternoon at the ocean..but whipped cream on turds! Man ...and I had sweet potato sticks with whipped cream today!*goes to barf now :0"
Posted by Aunty Depressant on "Whatever It is, to me." by Drifter
- "It is hard to borrow other's joy(if not a facade also), and sometimes knowing that a moment in time was ours, does make the difference when you can see it that way. The physical manifestations you described very well. I just know myself and so many others"
Posted by Aunty Depressant on "I Recall a Good Night's Sleep." by Drifter
- "This was fucking unbelievable, stealing the words right out of my mouth mere moments before I was to attempt a similar piece to this. You've summed it up brilliantly though, and I'll leave it at that."
Posted by Guillotine on "I Recall a Good Night's Sleep." by Drifter
- "whoa. the first stanza was a slap in the face. very bitter piece here. so much anger. [maybe a little too much]. catchy."
Posted by dying angel on "Proof" by Drifter
- "Damn. Your swinging hammers here, man. Great stuff! write on. "Burning hair, and melted manaiquins." Wicked."
Posted by Alanarchy on "Proof" by Drifter
- ""Planes and towers. falling bodies
Just take it in and smile
They at least bounce when they hit bottom" Wow.. that's poignant. I liked this piece."
Posted by Unknown on "Proof" by Drifter
- "beautiful, articulate, passionate.. you *know* what you are thinking."
Posted by Unknown on "Thursday" by Drifter
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