Comments by All Members
- "Excellent. It was shadowed and when I read it, I almost felt like I was invading somebody's private secrets. Is the man speaking to his daughter (or son, but I took it as if he was a man speaking to his daughter)? If so, I can tell that he really did love her. I was thinking she must have died or something, and that as the man looks back, he regrets all the times he didn't show his affection. Very well-written. Thanks for sharing!:) (Also, I absolutely loved how when you take your mouse of the words, "But words fail me." comes over "I love you." Clever.)"
Posted by Unknown on "Words Fail Me" by SilentStalker
- "I read this before I joined up and reckoned that this could be my future home. Not sure if it was poem of the day or I checked your profile. Anyway it was re-assuring to think that some of my more controversial pieces wouldn't be rejected out of hand. Still chuckling 7 months later - wasn't sure it was you until just now. Kudos sarge, from the chair force."
Posted by dwells on "I Just Wanna Muff Dive Baby" by SilentStalker
- "I really enjoyed this, if you get a chance please check out my work titled The Chronophibian it is about a frog as well."
Posted by Alchemist on "The Frog" by SilentStalker
- "Damn.. From the mans point of view in a womans world.. oh how dirty it is.. I feel you .. Women can be monsters inside you...."
Posted by Devilish on "Bright Overalls" by SilentStalker
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