Comments by All Members
- "A nice poem! I like your writing style. it portraits how small one little life is in the style of "why would anyone care about one extra stupid kid dying?". beautiful!"
Posted by Unknown on "A question to the world" by Invisibledarkness
- "Mark im sorry you dont need her no you won't find another girl like her. doesnt meen you won't find another girl that you like."
Posted by Unknown on "Always Losing" by Invisibledarkness
- "Awwweee... I almost hate it when someone makes me feel emotion... But since it's you it's ok.. I love it.. There are still ones that feel love or desire it... Lovely!!!!"
Posted by Devilish on "Hearts in the Sand" by Invisibledarkness
- "It hurts when your left alone when someone is gone. The pain inside sometimes hard to gone. But we live each day, some how find away. the Romeo and Juliet complex is all to familier to us who lose someone close. This is an awesome write and I hope you find that, which you so painfully lost again. write on:)"
Posted by johnbevan17 on "Bittersweet Lullaby" by Invisibledarkness
- "We can't keep our true essence suppressed for long. That is, just the way it is. But as a defense mechanism we absolutely have to hide who we are and only share ourselves with the people we love. There are consequences for that sort of thing. Nice piece."
Posted by Unknown on "The Real Me" by Invisibledarkness
- "Wow! I couldn't have said anything near that good... Yo know we care Invisible... A closed mouth don't get fed... And with this here you shall eat, we shall feed.... =)"
Posted by Devilish on "So Much For Caring" by Invisibledarkness
- "Going from caring to scaring? You've succeeded I do believe with this one. Don't underestimate others if they are reserved and withdrawn - it's only a survival instinct. Hope you feel better soon."
Posted by dwells on "So Much For Caring" by Invisibledarkness
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