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So Much For Caring
By Invisibledarkness
As the knife enters my chest,
The crimson liquid flows like a violent waterfall.
Why did you do
this?
Why did you ALL do this?
Everyone I've ever trusted...
Every time I put my faith in someone's hands.
It's always the same
result...
Am I not good enough?
Did I do something wrong?
That every single one of you,
Has to make me bleed?
That when
I fight for your affection and love,
On this God forsaken battlefield,
I always lose the war?
What the hell did I do?
I don't desserve
to be able to trust the ones that mean the most to me?
Is that fuckin
fair?
In any way?
I don't think so,
But if any of you
disagree,
Then push the knife deeper.
No remorse...
I fought
with the same futile effort...
Does it even matter that I cared?
Cuz I don't anymore...
You know what...?
Crimson's a beautiful
color...
So let it flow.
Cuz I tried to care,
But no one
else did...
So my blood is on your hands,
I love you all.
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Copyright 2011 Invisibledarkness
Published on Monday, September 5, 2011.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "So Much For Caring"
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A former member wrote:
Beautifully done. Sometimes your friends are the real enemy.
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A former member wrote:
i still care :)
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On Saturday, September 10, 2011, Invisibledarkness
(23)
wrote:
i know thanks :)
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On Tuesday, September 6, 2011, dwells
(4284) wrote:
Going from caring to scaring? You've succeeded I do believe with this one. Don't underestimate others if they are reserved and withdrawn - it's only a survival instinct. Hope you feel better soon.
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On Saturday, September 10, 2011, Devilish
(2657) wrote:
Wow! I couldn't have said anything near that good... Yo know we care Invisible... A closed mouth don't get fed... And with this here you shall eat, we shall feed.... =)
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