Fantasy Angel

By Invisibledarkness

I see you in my dreams,
You seem so real.
Yet you're not there...
Why aren't you there?
You reach out to me,
And I do the same in return.
I can't shake this feeling of longing,
But you're not real...
Oh how I wish you were real...
As the tears sting my eyes,
I'm still in this enchantment that some would call a dream.
I wanna wake up,
But not without you.
You know I can't have you,
So you torture me with your presence.
You make me look into your captivating eyes,
Then push me away.
Why can't you be real?
Why can't any of this be real?
Please be real...
My fantasy angel,
Oh how you're only a fantasy,
It rips my heart to shreds.
I changed my mind...
I don't wanna wake up,
I wanna be where you are...
Please stay my angel...


The light burns my eyes as awake once more,
My angel is gone once again...
I'll see you tonight,
And then every night forever more.

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Copyright 2011 Invisibledarkness
Published on Saturday, September 10, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • dwells On Saturday, September 10, 2011, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Quoth the raven - very good effort and heartfelt; I was captivated by your insight beyond your years, congrats!

  • Invisibledarkness On Saturday, September 10, 2011, Invisibledarkness (23)By person wrote:

    i like the beyond my years part thanks :)

  • Devilish On Saturday, September 10, 2011, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Beautiful! I knew you could do it! A perfect sentiment and delivery... Scholar

  • Invisibledarkness On Saturday, September 10, 2011, Invisibledarkness (23)By person wrote:

    Thanks for the writing idea kimmy hope i did it some justice

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