Comments by All Members
- "Thank you so much Ainsof (why did you change your username?) And yes, our memories define us, including the best ones and the worst, so many of them, lol. Thank you so much for your feedback once again, means a lot!"
Posted by Cindy-ydniC on "Memory" by Cindy-ydniC
- "Some memories go, we lose them in time, The ones we remember, are sometimes unkind, but the ones that are good, warm our hearts inside. awesome write:)"
Posted by johnbevan17 on "Memory" by Cindy-ydniC
- "And that is just how memories should be kept - beautiful. And please, keep no lists because they only harden the heart."
Posted by dwells on "Memory" by Cindy-ydniC
- "floating memories.... fireflies in the night.... twinkle and wink.... then gone. A very tender reflection on what comprises the vast corpus of life... who we are and what we've been... as we wait to see what will become our future memories... very nice catalog of so many little blinks, moments so fleeting. Thank you, good to read your words again. "
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Memory" by Cindy-ydniC
- "it is so kind of you to have read most of the poems i have on here and the kind words really helps my self esteem, so thank you, it means so much to me"
Posted by Cindy-ydniC on "The lonely polar bear" by Cindy-ydniC
- "wonderful write! to feel protected and loved this way is a paradise within a destructive world...hold on to your superman."
Posted by natalie on "Simple man" by Cindy-ydniC
- "welcome to dp. this was very well put together. and i for one can empathize with ithaving felt like this so many times.
thanks for sharing."
Posted by natalie on "Clown" by Cindy-ydniC
- "maybe we all know this feeling, this think mask that we wear to fit in, to make ourselves acceptably social... to allow the companion to stay on. I wonder to what extent we can ever avoid feeling alone; I mean... seems like there's always going to be something, some part of us... that which makes us who we are, maybe... that will not be communicable, or will forever remain more than what can be told or accurately interpreted... perhaps.... very soul-searching write, quite pensive and deep.... this clown is not funny, ms cindy. Thank you for sharing."
Posted by Unknown on "Clown" by Cindy-ydniC
- "the beginning of this seemed to work in some great imagery, almost medieval, maybe. Love the play of death/death, the anaphora works well, too.... bring about that tone of doom, perhaps. The polaroid seemed to contrast sharply with the somewhat medieval imagery I envisioned early on... quite the snuff poem, well done, and thanks."
Posted by Unknown on "Invite me to death" by Cindy-ydniC
- "funny how love builds one beyond flesh.... creates the immortality we seek to see in the other... the love beyond life....the 4 ever of schoolyard adoration.... do we ever lose that ideal? and yet... we know how things fade.... the mortality of love, perhaps... simple man.... of principle..... maybe, well composed, thoughtful and an interesting development from ideality to reality.... from superman to huggable... to flesh.... content with truth, what a wonderful way to be.... thanks for sharing."
Posted by Unknown on "Simple man" by Cindy-ydniC
- "another jewel sparkling in the dark, well written.... the emotion expressed with depth of feeling, of understanding... such a plight, this poor bear lost in endless winter. thank you."
Posted by Unknown on "The lonely polar bear" by Cindy-ydniC
- "Beautiful. You shed light on the fact that the girl wasn't the only one suffering. Good job."
Posted by Unknown on "rape" by Cindy-ydniC
- "you're fast becoming one to watch for.... I loved the tenderness of this, the flow, the many directions.... really took the reader along with the flakes.... and the concept... the hope and redemption.... and once touched... vanishes.... like love that cannot be held... that which is destroyed if it is not free.... well done, nicely wrought words... craftswomanship."
Posted by Unknown on "20 snow flakes" by Cindy-ydniC
- "i reaslly enjoyed this poem as well... a different look at the life of a polar bear through his eyes... i feel his plight .
welcome to dp ."
Posted by natalie on "The lonely polar bear" by Cindy-ydniC
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