Comments by All Members
- "Just an FYI on that second line I'm not sure the repeated line within it was intended. As for the rest, a super interesting read. The format kept me jumping from line to line which I think added a nice touch. Write on! :)"
Posted by Dilated View on "Dream The Night Away" by ArcticWolf999
- "im very sorry to hear of this tragedy, no one person she have to experience such suffering. that is just the worst ever. but your song....its so beautiful, its so poetic and it squeezes my heart after reading your story behind it. that song is brilliant in every sense. "within my haven...come fly to me...raven my raven" to me that's perfect I swear. I had a black cat named raven and on his ears he had unique hairs that looked like little wings, and I used to call him raven bird. haha but he died and I would love that tattooed on my thigh along with a portrait of him. its just to perfect. your song is uplifting and it brings tears while in the back of my mind im thinking of the tragedy and also reading your song that brings emotions all by itself. im moved and I hope when your ready you can finish that book, my best to you. awesome!"
Posted by haunted on "Raven My Raven" by ArcticWolf999
- "this is an amazing write, i can feel the melancholy state that you put out here, and your imagery is awesome. I'm sorry you lost your story in the fire. But please continue and make it a novel, the poem alone is that good, imagine the novel"
Posted by Unknown on "Raven My Raven" by ArcticWolf999
- "Thank you so much. Truly, for recognizing the pain behind this... Your kindness always touches me. and I was thinking about posting it on here. So every one on here could read it.
But i am only allotted so many credits (not for sure how you buy/get more) and the book is fairly long and some of it is still incomplete. When it is done it will be sold on amazon though. "
Posted by ArcticWolf999 on "Raven My Raven" by ArcticWolf999
- "Wow... The story behind this piece of your book made me sad.. I'm sorry for your loss and I'm sure that he loves your book and he is very proud of you..always... You are definitely a very talented writter! This raven's song is totally beautiful.. So serene, dark and magical.. It makes me fly away from here to a place where I could finally find eternal peace.. It is amazing what a good read can do to people, isn't it? Please let me know when/where I could buy your book.. I'm very interested now! And naturally, thank you very much for sharing this great piece! :) "
Posted by Unknown on "Raven My Raven" by ArcticWolf999
- "Thank you both for the comments. I am very glad you enjoyed this, and I am sorry for your troubles in life accused. Thanks for reading.
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Posted by ArcticWolf999 on "Rividly Cold" by ArcticWolf999
- "I must first say that I really love your author's note! That is exactly what I hope when someone injures me.. And your poem is just awesome! The harshness in your words is deep and intense.. I can relate to you.. I have experienced something similar before.. Excelent write ArticWolf! :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Rividly Cold" by ArcticWolf999
- "Well love can be both.. A beautiful and burning desire or a painful and evil tormentor.. And I prefer the first, since the second is waste of my precious time.. Very well penned ArticWolf.. :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Losing the battle and war" by ArcticWolf999
- "A dark and beautiful piece.. The emotions in your words are palpable and vivid.. This poem reminds me of that famous sentence "your pain is my pain, your sorrow is my sorrow".. I can imagine that you are a great and loyal friend.. :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Crimson Night" by ArcticWolf999
- "Very nice writting! You was very talented from the beginning it seems.. And that talent grows everyday more and more! Very good! :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Tic Toc" by ArcticWolf999
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