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Rividly Cold
By ArcticWolf999
(this is a writing about a person who tore my heart long ago.)
Rividly Cold
This night in the rain…
Looking through the window I see all my pain.
I see you, your lie.
As tears pour from the darkness of the sky.
You tore me up, broke me down, and left me wanting when you’re not around.
For all I held inside…
Lost every bit of pride…
Left me in the rain to endure alone…
You tore apart…
A heart once rived and bold now left alone and standing cold
I have read beyond your lies
So this is now our goodbye
This will not make me fall again
I will move along and mend
Your life is severed from mine
It’ll free my mind in time
Down this road alone
Carrying myself all my own
You will not overtake my thoughts this night
because you never were my light…
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Copyright 2014 ArcticWolf999
Author's Note:
May he fall into the firey pits of eternal damnation... and by that I mean I hope someone destoys his very core.Comments on "Rividly Cold"
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On Sunday, September 14, 2014, Drayvinio
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wrote:
Lovely wording.
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On Thursday, July 24, 2014, ArcticWolf999
(53) wrote:
Thank you both for the comments. I am very glad you enjoyed this, and I am sorry for your troubles in life accused. Thanks for reading.
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On Monday, July 21, 2014, Accused
(7) wrote:
I had a broken heart once as well... don't worry karma's a bitch Loved the read! c:
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A former member wrote:
I must first say that I really love your author's note! That is exactly what I hope when someone injures me.. And your poem is just awesome! The harshness in your words is deep and intense.. I can relate to you.. I have experienced something similar before.. Excelent write ArticWolf! :)
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