Mind Fuck.
By TornPieces
(there is now art to match this piece-http://indictedpieces.deviantart.com/art/Mind-F-k-373950888)
What is this,this place.
You say Im free,
but it looks like a cage
Screaming shooting
crying darkness
Why cant I see
I move my fingers....
Feels like worms and secrets
my mind, feels...
torn to pieces
Torn to pieces.
I look down , my feet running
barefoot your foot....
right behind my heel
My eyes start to feel
Like the membranes
the membranes will peel
From how many times
they tell me I didn't see
what I really did,
I really did see.
What? you say I'm crazy
I made it up
I touch the floor.
carpet tendrils
My bruises sore.
I hit myself?
but I thought I saw you strike
You say I did.
Yes ....its not real.
Maybe your right.
I did lose my sight
Im not okay ,
Im a little crazy
I like to make up stories
and then they charge me fees....
Just for attention...
I speak the lies
or are they real
your hand defies
My sense of sanity
of truth or lie
your whispers silence me
worms and secrets
come on.
lets.
shhhh
Just forget.
Comments on " Mind Fuck."
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On Sunday, May 26, 2013, RubyXero
(481) wrote:
shhhhh... I loved this. The picture tied it in quite nicely as well. Seems you have many talents
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On Saturday, May 25, 2013, Electric-Chair
(121) wrote:
Desperate words with deep feelings, I Get it. Nice ink job
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On Saturday, May 25, 2013, Fallenfromgrace
(103) wrote:
I don't know where to even begin on this piece. It's a very disturbing yet.... almost an acceptance as well. Hell, I think we're all crazy... what's normal anymore? Great write.
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On Saturday, May 25, 2013, TornPieces
(27) wrote:
Lol I know for a fact im not normal! Trust me ...sometimes poetry is the only thing that keeps me functional. Thanks for the comment :)