Comments by TornPieces

  • "Thank you, forgive me for it being so intense, i wrote it while I was having a flashback kinda. Sometimes I have to write about this over and over again, so I can get it out of me. Thank you for being my audience , your ears take the silence away "
    Posted by TornPieces on "I think my Daddy broke me.." by TornPieces
  • "Thank you so much for this comment. I appreciate that it brought a message to you. It was very cathartic to write it "
    Posted by TornPieces on "Shell of Lies" by TornPieces
  • "Green is the color of money, and deception..and peopole turning blind eyes for money...gain..power... etc. thanks for the comment. "
    Posted by TornPieces on "Black" by TornPieces
  • "The adoring fans are all the hands that touch her...they are many. The races are every day, winning a race for normalcy....always being perfect. Nobody ever noticing. You hit it right where it meant. Thank you for correcting me on that too. Thanks for commenting guys :) All comments are so helpful and encouraging to me ~Torn"
    Posted by TornPieces on "I'm a Cute Girl " by TornPieces
  • "Its very much from my stream of consciousness, what I write sometimes. I'm glad that the thought will stick with you, I t impacts me the same, as if I didn't write it lol"
    Posted by TornPieces on "I'm a Cute Girl " by TornPieces
  • "Lol I know for a fact im not normal! Trust me ...sometimes poetry is the only thing that keeps me functional. Thanks for the comment :)"
    Posted by TornPieces on " Mind Fuck." by TornPieces
  • "This is SO beautiful. I have to read it over ...its so good. I really could see what was happening, the feeling of "finally finished" and the rushing hands and the "cute" pill bottle. Its a devious, tragic, love work. You've won yourself a fan"
    Posted by TornPieces on "September Suicides #1 (Call Center Violence)" by RubyXero
  • "This is amazing work. I love it so much. I love how you express your wrists as crying, and your logic completely dying. God thats such a truthful way of wording the disintegration of logic. Very Good."
    Posted by TornPieces on "Besides Blood and Tears" by Kristoff
  • "THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS. This poem says the truth of the mind. You've been through a mind f*** really, I can tell. And its not fair that just because of what was done to you, now you have to be labelled. You are as normal as you can be after what you've been through. *sorry you're hurting*"
    Posted by TornPieces on "mentally unstable" by the broken
  • "iced world..that they live in because they are murdered. black trees are the ones that hurt them, frozen as trees too.. They are agreeing, and remembering something they both went through...thats why there is a silence :) I appreciate your comment, and that you took the time to read it.. and notice things :) "
    Posted by TornPieces on "Frozen Innocence." by TornPieces
  • "Thank you so very much for your comments on my work :), they help me feel better, despite the subject matter of the poems"
    Posted by TornPieces on "Fantasy" by TornPieces
  • "These lines captured me "Ideas possess me I can see they are not mine Maybe from another department Of my shattered mind I am bound by their will" Love this, I feel this way often, first time I saw it expressed so accurately. Your a very strong poet. "
    Posted by TornPieces on "Fallacious Reality " by Melancholic VIncent
  • "Thank you so very much for this wonderful comment, im glad you enjoyed it as much as i enjoyed writing it :)"
    Posted by TornPieces on "Dark." by TornPieces
© 1998-2024 DarkPoetry LLC
Donate
[Join (free)]    [More Poetry]    [Get Help]    [Our Poets]    [All Poems]    [Terms & Privacy]