Awaken

By Dilated View

I entered this dream
Fully aware of the possibility
That everything and everyone
Were linked together in infinity
But quickly came to embrace the comfort
Of a defense mechanism game
Where every meaning seeking creature
Seems suspiciously to blame
So who am I to notice
Whispers of rebellion on the breeze
Within the confines of my skyline
Where the world is what it seems
Begin to beat my head in rhythm
Of chaotic thought for change
To exist where words like "living"
Are not synonymous with "pain"
Throw down all weapons of distraction
Such as fear and hate and greed
And find that slumber is a crutch
That I no longer seem to heed

I exit my cave
And look back and forth with confusion
Pinch myself and shake my brain
Then sort the concrete from illusion
At which point the clouds of doubt clash
With wisdom and desire
Because I am alive inside, I find
In the aftermath of flash fire
So I reach out to the comfort
Of my ever growing whim
I know I've breathed this air before
But cannot remember when
The dust settles down around me
Contradictory to despair
From when my soul was tugged around
Abandoned ship bereft of care
And I am frozen for the moment
In a sea of disbelief
As life comes crashing down upon me
Like a flood of sweet relief

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Copyright 2010 Dilated View
Published on Saturday, March 27, 2010.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

random thoughts
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  • cogitative On Friday, February 10, 2017, cogitative (88)By person wrote:

    nicely executed

  • A former member wrote: Beautiful. A beautiful search... :)

  • ArcticWolf999 On Thursday, July 17, 2014, ArcticWolf999 (53)By person wrote:

    Not to be blunt but.....Dude This is epic.

  • A former member wrote: Perfect 10 for a poetic piece...Whispers of rebellion on the breeze Within the confines of my skyline Where the world is what it seems...your thoughts are indeed depth, powerful stanza like this do commands...again I'm impressed by your style, every line are creeping and dark...Thank you for sharing this to us...

  • Beautiful Incidental On Tuesday, September 18, 2012, Beautiful Incidental (38)By person wrote:

    i've only recently discovered your work. i love your voice. i look forward to reading more...

  • A Life Without You On Wednesday, April 28, 2010, A Life Without You (146)By person wrote:

    wow, i enjoyed this piece. great imagery and flow, excellent story...

  • A former member wrote: Ummm... this is one of the best things you have written. You opened and let life and real emotion come out with intensity. This is a deep piece of art that you should be proud of. Thank you for sharing it, I feel blessed to be able to see a deeper part of you. =)

  • A former member wrote: heavy piece.... felt like an inner awareness... searching for something.. some form of truth to clear the burdens..

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