Tic Toc

By ArcticWolf999

I failed to mention this before but this is actually a poem I wrote when
I was about 12. I found it in an old note book of mine. It made me smile.
Rembering my train of thought from back then. Looking at it now it reads
very childish but to my readers I hope you enjoy this non the less.





..Tic, Toc..

Life is like the hands of a clock.

1,2 do you even have a clue

3,4 about this world you all adore

5,6 let me help you try and get a grip on this fix

7,8 its never really to late, when you and lose your way because of what

eveyone else has to say. Hear me out, its all I ask, its but a simple task.


..9,10 Get Up and Walk Again, escape from your enclosed pin..

If you still don't understand, i'll help you get a clue


Just try back from 1 and 2

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Copyright 2011 ArcticWolf999
Published on Monday, March 14, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

time is life and life is the esance we breath.
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  • ArcticWolf999 On Monday, July 28, 2014, ArcticWolf999 (53)By person wrote:

    Thank you so much and yes, I have been writing from a very young age.

  • A former member wrote: Very nice writting! You was very talented from the beginning it seems.. And that talent grows everyday more and more! Very good! :)

  • A former member wrote: Nice concept. Could use a bit of polish but interesting poem none the less.

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