Crimson Night

By ArcticWolf999

Welcome to paridice, such a wondeful hell and even the biggest diamond
is the hardest one to sell. Im not demanding tears of blood or acidic rain,
just someone to help me through to ease the pain.

A body battered, a mind thats tathered, a heart thats skattered. This is
my rain. Through the tears, that fall I can see it all this is my rain.


Lost on the edge. Hanging from the cliff. Letting go to restart the game
again. You're deceiving yourself with that guilible mind ..and your destroying
yourself for the trust you can't find.

A body still battered, a mind still thathered, a heart still scattered,
this is my rain. Through the tears that fall, I can see it all. This is
my rain.

Can not understand what you beleive so I fly high to make you see. The
way you live the lie ..and hide the tears I know you cry. I wanna burn
your pain away as you bowe your head to pray. Still lurking in my mind.
You never left my heart. Ever mourning that sightful day you and were
set apart.

Our bodies battered, our minds still tathered, our hearts still scattered.

This is our rain. Through our tears that fall we can see it all.


This is our rain.

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Copyright 2011 ArcticWolf999
Published on Friday, March 11, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

I wrote this poem in dedication to someone close to me. I hope all who read this enjoy it.
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  • ArcticWolf999 On Monday, July 28, 2014, ArcticWolf999 (53)By person wrote:

    Yes actually, and thank you. This one holds a part of my heart from a past love. I'm glad you liked this.

  • A former member wrote: A dark and beautiful piece.. The emotions in your words are palpable and vivid.. This poem reminds me of that famous sentence "your pain is my pain, your sorrow is my sorrow".. I can imagine that you are a great and loyal friend.. :)

  • maddin foxxxy On Saturday, November 5, 2011, maddin foxxxy (358)By person wrote:

    I like the last lines specially

  • A former member wrote: This is very good

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