Comments by All Members
- "don't force it too hard perhaps? relax a little.you'll find that girl with whom you feel you can talk to eventually I'm sure, sooner or later, besides, sometimes that drama is confusing, and overrated. don't get so caught up in your frustrations.."
Posted by Patches on "Failed Portrait" by Ultimate Mistake
- "well your inability is some cind of a blesing also... makes you think, and express in a way most of people cant... through a wiritten word... nice work I must say"
Posted by dumbone on "Failed Portrait" by Ultimate Mistake
- "very cool write, i have a hard on for the angel of death. so i really loved the tribute, but in dreams, its merely his breath, and when your awake its surely your death! excellent poem, i really liked it."
Posted by haunted on "Found Poem" by Ultimate Mistake
- "There are some. Don't give up hope. They're out there. And they're all saying they wish they could find guys that really care about the girl and her feelings instead of getting under her skirt. That's where you come in lol. You'll meet her. She's looking for you too. Patience, my boy, patience."
Posted by Ladyhawke on "Desire" by Ultimate Mistake
- "Beautiful!! Any guy that can write a good romantic poem, and mean it, deserves to get the girl. Hope all works out for ya ;)"
Posted by Phantasmagoria on "Desire" by Ultimate Mistake
- "Damn, if only guys around here talked like that. Their idea of a romantic dinner is going to Sonic with the guys and their girls too. It's refreshing to see that some men/boys still have a romantic bone in their body.... And this is so incredibly sweet. Your word usage is also impressive. The way you describe every little detail, it really adds life to the poem. Brava!!"
Posted by Ladyhawke on "Desire" by Ultimate Mistake
- "It depends on what kind of girl she is I guess. Cuz their some chicks that like things like this and others might think it's wierd. so idk if u should or not. But that would be really good if she was in to poetry"
Posted by Jesse Guzman on "Desire" by Ultimate Mistake
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