Desire

By Ultimate Mistake

I looked up to the stars,
but all i saw was a quasar.
It is so beautiful.
It is the most stunning site to behold.
Getting too close is dangerous, I know,
but i draw nearer and nearer.
I want to grab onto its beauty,
and hold onto it for an eternity!
Arm in arm...
together to hear the angels sing.
Arm in arm...
forever just her and me!

I look back down to the grass.
Fantasies can never last.
A deep breathe is solemnly aquired.
A warm beauty is wearily desired.
My arms are left with a cold absence.
Will you fill its empty void with your presence?

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Copyright 2012 Ultimate Mistake
Published on Wednesday, January 25, 2012.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

This is about i girl i like
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  • A former member wrote: perfection once again

  • Devilish On Wednesday, January 25, 2012, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Yes!! Beautiful.. hello there.. Scholar

  • Phantasmagoria On Wednesday, January 25, 2012, Phantasmagoria (121)By person wrote:

    Beautiful!! Any guy that can write a good romantic poem, and mean it, deserves to get the girl. Hope all works out for ya ;)

  • Ultimate Mistake On Wednesday, January 25, 2012, Ultimate Mistake (21)By person wrote:

    hah thanks :)

  • Ladyhawke On Wednesday, January 25, 2012, Ladyhawke (392)By person wrote:

    Damn, if only guys around here talked like that. Their idea of a romantic dinner is going to Sonic with the guys and their girls too. It's refreshing to see that some men/boys still have a romantic bone in their body.... And this is so incredibly sweet. Your word usage is also impressive. The way you describe every little detail, it really adds life to the poem. Brava!!

  • Ultimate Mistake On Wednesday, January 25, 2012, Ultimate Mistake (21)By person wrote:

    hahah thank you very much. If only the girls of my age group liked romantics instead of the" popular" guys at school

  • Ladyhawke On Wednesday, January 25, 2012, Ladyhawke (392)By person wrote:

    There are some. Don't give up hope. They're out there. And they're all saying they wish they could find guys that really care about the girl and her feelings instead of getting under her skirt. That's where you come in lol. You'll meet her. She's looking for you too. Patience, my boy, patience.

  • Jesse Guzman On Wednesday, January 25, 2012, Jesse Guzman (39)By person wrote:

    Nice! ... Has she read it? :o

  • Ultimate Mistake On Wednesday, January 25, 2012, Ultimate Mistake (21)By person wrote:

    No. Should i read it to her? I was thinking of writing her a different poem for valentine's day:asking her out

  • Jesse Guzman On Wednesday, January 25, 2012, Jesse Guzman (39)By person wrote:

    It depends on what kind of girl she is I guess. Cuz their some chicks that like things like this and others might think it's wierd. so idk if u should or not. But that would be really good if she was in to poetry

  • Ultimate Mistake On Wednesday, January 25, 2012, Ultimate Mistake (21)By person wrote:

    well thank you for your opinions. I appreciate it. I'll figure it out sooner or later lol

  • Jesse Guzman On Wednesday, January 25, 2012, Jesse Guzman (39)By person wrote:

    no prob(:

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