Comments by All Members
- "peace and vacation for piece and vacate - hmm...wondering if intentional? Definitely a duality if intended or not. The setup for this was very well done but the final closing a bit weak which is pretty much normal when mixed emotions always leave an escape route, thanks BM."
Posted by dwells on "Destruction" by brokensme
- "This is good, other than a few misspellings, but I won't nit pick. I think it's quite bold. Well done!"
Posted by Deathkitten on "Destruction" by brokensme
- ""Blessed are the cracked, for they can let in the light" -Groucho Marx. I think that people ridden with strife do in fact often make the greatest and most beautiful individuals."
Posted by Unknown on "A letter to my heart" by brokensme
- ""Push me all you want
Guess what
I don't give a fuck"
Absolutely love those lines. People shouldn't let others push them down. I definitely think those are words to live by."
Posted by Unknown on "Guess What" by brokensme
- "Interesting... A recurring dream that haunts you at night. Heh. Wish I had those... They are said to hold meaning to them, a deeper meaning than most dreams, no? But, 'tis a wise lesson. "
Posted by Unknown on "Do You Trust Me Yet?" by brokensme
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