Comments by All Members
- "Wow, "Nobody" reflects a feelings that I battle with on a daily bases. It's beautiful!"
Posted by Unknown on "Nobody" by MoonLitShadowz
- "Life is really tough when you both work and are students or trying to get a career going. People get grumpy when they are always under pressure and being tested. It get better if you can hang together for a while. Good luck."
Posted by dwells on "Failure" by MoonLitShadowz
- "I seriously try not to be, but then things keep happening that make me think about babies and then yeah...I worked really hard to get that imagery so thank you"
Posted by MoonLitShadowz on "Warring" by MoonLitShadowz
- "I like it ... other than the fact that you is all baby crazy again but, the imagery you used here was amazing "
Posted by Frater Synth on "Warring" by MoonLitShadowz
- "you seek hope in a race that seems so futile, but i guess that persistence pays off. god speed to the winner's circle.
nicely done.
"
Posted by natalie on "Losing Race" by MoonLitShadowz
- "people do see it, I know I do, but what my problem is, is that Im afraid that this random person would think Im crazy if I'm wrong and I read their expressions wrong so I choose not to say a word. which I find to be a terrible thing"
Posted by Poetic-Realm on "Nobody" by MoonLitShadowz
- "ahh this one was very personal and I enjoyed reading it very much so. I love this site because it allows myself to jump into other people's minds or situations, and I feel for you guys."
Posted by Poetic-Realm on "Beacon" by MoonLitShadowz
- "lovely sentiment filled memories, broken down into wonderful sequence..
nice flow. nice imagery.
thanks for sharing.
welcome to dp."
Posted by natalie on "Waiting Memories" by MoonLitShadowz
- "This really touched me. Perhaps because I long for the type of love that can calm the chaos inside of me......... Very nice write"
Posted by ANGELSLAYER on "Chaos Calmed" by MoonLitShadowz
- "I really do understand the sentiment here, honestly, and it is the sentiment that I agree with. In light of that truth, I'll keep the rest of my opinion to myself. All that really matters anyway is the thought that seems to have spawned this well written and well thought out piece. Great job. I wouldn't change a thing. --Draven"
Posted by Unknown on "Freedom Isn't Free" by MoonLitShadowz
- "without their sacrifice, we would have nothing...
go back to G. Washington and the blue coats... that's how close we came to being British... Nice piece, write on "
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Freedom Isn't Free" by MoonLitShadowz
- "Thank you love...I tried to post my other works but they were too big so i tried to use my credit card to upgrade to gold after i had already up graded to basic but it hasn't shown me as a gold member so I can't yet...I wrote this one to have something up"
Posted by MoonLitShadowz on "Beacon" by MoonLitShadowz
- "This is a new one. I likes it. you need to add all the others you wrote too tho. i know you think what you write isn't the best but trust me post it here on DP and people will open your eyes to just how good it is."
Posted by Frater Synth on "Beacon" by MoonLitShadowz
