Comments by All Members
- "i LOVE how the title and the poem tie in. this is a great poem. short, but to the point.. lovely as always ~Drea~"
Posted by Drea on "Déjá Vu" by maddin foxxxy
- "I like this! I know exactally how it feels, some of my poetry is like this, but they are not this short!...Great Job"
Posted by Rebel_Angel on "Déjá Vu" by maddin foxxxy
- "sshhh.. I'm still trying to picture you naked. Seriously, it was as if you inhaled the world and then with one breath, painted a mural on the sky of what you percieve. *muah* wonderful :::OLd"
Posted by OLd SouL on "Nudity of Expression" by maddin foxxxy
- "beautiful work, and "I will not edit
my words / But I will breathe in
more than I need to..." is just marvellous...you've captured this sensation perfectly. purr
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Posted by purr_verse on "Nudity of Expression" by maddin foxxxy
- ""I have this stranger inside I've always want to meet" Wow... I've felt like that before... This poem is such an interesting concept. Well done, it's great. ~Wish Upon A Star
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Posted by Unknown on "Nudity of Expression" by maddin foxxxy
- "Outstanding poetry, i was at the edge of my seat reading slow to capture the very essence of this poem, it is wonderful, i will have to read more of your work if the rest is anything like this masterpiece, good job, ~Emptyness~"
Posted by Emptyness Inside Me on "Nudity of Expression" by maddin foxxxy
- "I wish you would have kept the original version on here for us. I feel like I'm missing an emotion or a thought that added to this wonderful piece. The beauty you've found is desired by so many of the jealous eyes reading this art."
Posted by Midnight Phoenix on "Framed form Of you" by maddin foxxxy
- "you found the right chords to strum and you played them as if your fingers were made of the instrument. I couldn't say that one verse inparticular was my fav. Every bit flowed all too well through my mind. Love it, hun. :::OLd"
Posted by OLd SouL on "Here's My Guitar" by maddin foxxxy
- "So beautiful. It drips with a slow pulse; the slow plucking of a metal string. Resonating through my bones like a cold wind thtough a net."
Posted by Stranger on "Here's My Guitar" by maddin foxxxy
- "I was excited about this after merely reading the title! I love the "I'd kiss you" stanza. Very strong intro as well. The piece feels so sad, but there's that glimmering peace hidden in there as well."
Posted by Midnight Phoenix on "Here's My Guitar" by maddin foxxxy
- ""I'd kiss you
for a taste
of the heaven
hidden here on earth
and going into
waste..." those lines just play in my head over and over. i loved this. wonderful ~Drea~
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Posted by Drea on "Here's My Guitar" by maddin foxxxy
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