Comments by All Members
- "hah this is wicked , monkey (either that or my mind's always.. yea) but in such a delightful thoughtful way it sucked me in.. and i totally dig how you wrote and structured this, very cool.."
Posted by sulkylime on "a paper filled alley" by Dancing_Monkey
- "contemplation mystically and spritually written with brilliant metaphors and wonder, but i bet that now,you have answered the questions you pondered as u wrote this, something epic about this also, brillaint thoughtful poetry"
Posted by Anth on "Come Sweet Unknown." by Dancing_Monkey
- "for me the first few lines were best,so very deep and intelligent, i feel the spirit of this, especially with living in norway i can in a strange way see so much in this, superb monkey "
Posted by Anth on "Scholars lore." by Dancing_Monkey
- "holy crap this was farkin brilliant my friend.*one hole makes a whole,then he left me...*and the end need i say it was sheer magnificence,IT WAS.**** and well deserved,too bad i don't have more room to add favorites cause this would surely be added.much l"
Posted by knightmirror on "a paper filled alley" by Dancing_Monkey
- "yet again Monkey you describe a depraved and vile act in a way, that if one is not paying attention, would make it seem attractive and mystical, your very talented"
Posted by Unknown on "a paper filled alley" by Dancing_Monkey
- "I can't get over the powerful depth and truth in the last two lines. And overall wonderfully haunting and intriguing piece, I deeply enjoyed reading this, over and over. ~L"
Posted by Lynaes on "a paper filled alley" by Dancing_Monkey
- "Jovial facades tend to hide the deep waters underneath... and some believe truths come with a stern and solemn face... though some of the greatest wisdom can be found behind a painted face or inside a dancing monkey. :::OLd"
Posted by OLd SouL on "a paper filled alley" by Dancing_Monkey
- "youve amazed me yet again monkey, you had the awesome concept, and you even had the wisdom in lines to use for this, and the way the last part made it all come one, this is utter brilliance"
Posted by Anth on "a paper filled alley" by Dancing_Monkey
- "My mind is always in the gutter, but thanx for pointing it out. I love the way it ended. Quite a description "A sour but sweet taste Filling my mouth with what seemed like thousand searching lives" Awesome ^_^"
Posted by Johny_D_Lewis on "a paper filled alley" by Dancing_Monkey
- "_there was a very dark element at work in this piece.sublte but very dark...the last two lines hammer the point in nicely and make my head scream...i love it when that happens.awesome,Peter.:)tim"
Posted by suicideseason on "a paper filled alley" by Dancing_Monkey
- "unfulfilled desire is a fulfilling journey on its own.. whether to be doomed or not.. reminds me of the last scene in braveheart. that's my take on it. powerful.. loved it, monkey !"
Posted by sulkylime on "Come Sweet Unknown." by Dancing_Monkey
- "still it sounds like you intuitively know your path.. extinguished, is it.. years of hollow eyes but you're not blind.. only a brave soldier.. you're not taken back by the blackened clouds, you'll move forward.. the stand you take, driven by your unfulfil"
Posted by sulkylime on "Come Sweet Unknown." by Dancing_Monkey
- "like an insinuation .. a feeling .. projected ..this reads as realization to me .. but with a flipped despair ..a saddening irony .. but i dont look at you , i look at myself ... know what i mean ? .. very cool man ... funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "Come Sweet Unknown." by Dancing_Monkey
- "ok .... i got it ... ready , ? ... acupuncture .. thats what you do ... subtle pins placed , and the effect is felt elsewhere ...insinuation , leads to a pointed gift prhaps not even fully realized ..
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Posted by capt_funguy on "Come Sweet Unknown." by Dancing_Monkey
- ""Undertake the darklings of tommorow,
Teach them the learnings,
Ages of sorrow." I must say this is one of the best stanzas I have read yet "
Posted by Unknown on "Scholars lore." by Dancing_Monkey
- "this is a challenging piece, i must say... i think i have to agree with sole; i also got a self-duality, multi-faceted essence somehow/where/within..."
Posted by purr_verse on "Scholars lore." by Dancing_Monkey
- "i've remembered "in desire, come sweet eluminess fire" from when i first read this.. still goes thru my head from time to time. line for line, this is so consice and meaningful. infact every line is quotable. i relate to thie a lot, a proud piece, monkey."
Posted by Daemonicus on "Come Sweet Unknown." by Dancing_Monkey
- "Brilliant. Poetry that makes you think. My mind is feeling something (it hasn't in a while) a tingling sensation. Monkey, you're awesome..such talent (not shocked) ^_^"
Posted by Johny_D_Lewis on "Homogeneous presence" by Dancing_Monkey
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