Comments by All Members
- "Whoa...Beautiful, Peter. This was so diverse, But I loved it. 'Beliefs seperated make a lot of truths' was a great line. And mimes...Touching the invisable wall...That was GREAT. I Loved it.*Adds to fave list*~Mikey"
Posted by BleedSilver on "a paper filled alley" by Dancing_Monkey
- "You can almost feel a beating heart, bleeding in your palm...So short, But deep. I am sure I missed something. *goes back to read again*~Mikey"
Posted by BleedSilver on "Pulse" by Dancing_Monkey
- "'Gather the kindred' That statement brings about so many different thoughts. Short, but altogether wonderful poem Peter. *hugs* ~Tracy~"
Posted by Midnight Shadow on "Pulse" by Dancing_Monkey
- "reads like an accusation ... reads from a pulpit of vision ... a welcome scolding for betterment ....lol .. great work man ... funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "Pulse" by Dancing_Monkey
- "i like this, as if you described the shapeless thoughts that give birth to everything that come from where?and the thought here is of a united state of mind, to rise"
Posted by Anth on "Pulse" by Dancing_Monkey
- ""concealed mindworm"-i like every word of this...something being born within...thats how the last line strikes me..."
Posted by girlafraid on "Pulse" by Dancing_Monkey
- "The dancing Martyr, one sneeky little bastard. LOL, i love that line, this read was one of the best i've seen of you of late peter. wonderful. i came back to dp at a good time i suppose"
Posted by _Andrew_ on "a paper filled alley" by Dancing_Monkey
- "Alot of art and purity is seen here, yet I can mostly see with eyes directly at the writer. Some sight indeed, and more clear now. Last and most importent. I like the ending, you wrote it long ago. We all do. Tiger"
Posted by Blinded_Tiger on "a paper filled alley" by Dancing_Monkey
- "I am no more a man, then to envy. Especialy when seperated. Yet I envy not you, but the four hands that seemed better at saving ... That is true selfishness? And is it not ironic my friend?"
Posted by Blinded_Tiger on "a paper filled alley" by Dancing_Monkey
- "Hell yeah! See behind the veil, open your mind, think for yourself, question authority...Nothing sings better than the song of freedom...Nothing hurts worse than the opression of that ideal..."
Posted by Solace on "a paper filled alley" by Dancing_Monkey
- "It took me a while, at least the third paragraph to inturst my mind with the content, and then you did a 180, or so it at first seemed, and I had to catch up again. But at the end, and not only for the very last, very catchy and thought provoking ending I"
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "a paper filled alley" by Dancing_Monkey
- "I think this has a wonderful flow...it's just so graceful...I love your choice of words...it makes my mind's eye work like mad to make images to match everything you speak of. Nice."
Posted by Unknown on "Homogeneous presence" by Dancing_Monkey
- "WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT..You are a noble of this site, this...this...Is brilliant work, you need to get real. You are an amazing poet with amazing work...+T.P.U+"
Posted by Unknown on "a paper filled alley" by Dancing_Monkey
- "i told you already monk ... but an echo never hurts ... this piece is a killer ... a sacrificial romp through the dirty back alleys in your head ... yeah ... you look tired my friend ....lol ... greatness man ,.. funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "a paper filled alley" by Dancing_Monkey
- "Damn this had such a back alley feel to it that left me a little disturbed. And yet this was still full of melancholy insight that hit me just right. Love the mime line at the end. ~Ryan"
Posted by Unknown on "a paper filled alley" by Dancing_Monkey
- "Why do some think mimes fool, when they are able to touch the Invisible Wall
Right in front of you?* I just might use this sometime (quoting you of course) =-MO-=
"
Posted by Unknown on "a paper filled alley" by Dancing_Monkey
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