Comments by All Members
- "I'm not sure of your placement of lupine -- I'm not really sure what context you're presenting it in. However, the rest seems rather expressive. -pxc"
Posted by Sepulcrawl on "Fruitless." by Dancing_Monkey
- "i agree.. absolutely elegant... the sheer eloquence of your expression left me breathless!"
Posted by Zhee on "Fruitless." by Dancing_Monkey
- ""Yes we hold the power, drained
Before the afterflight. Mold my inner rhyme, the beat in bloom" ~ Sensational! . . atmospheric and absolute sublimity. ~ Rose
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Posted by Unknown on "Pulse" by Dancing_Monkey
- "This is wicked.. i like it.. very much.. "Gather the kindred, a new age has begone" excellent line there.. -Michael"
Posted by DarkWolf on "Pulse" by Dancing_Monkey
- "Wow . . so elegant and graceful; a strange fragility, with an exquisite eeriness and complexity. Utterly enchanting . . ~ Rose ~"
Posted by Unknown on "Fruitless." by Dancing_Monkey
- ""A life of illusions crave for yet another" - fantastic line; i love it... this is a highly excellent piece with so many images in such a small space; love the conclusion. :) damn damn fine!"
Posted by purr_verse on "Come Sweet Unknown." by Dancing_Monkey
- "Ohh yea. I should comment on the poem itself. Hmm you have a way of making me not do that ... Well its gooooooood. And hmm ... no dude this write is too intimate you like. I cant do it ... laters maybe. -Nadir-"
Posted by Blinded_Tiger on "Pulse" by Dancing_Monkey
- "Thats all I know, and that was found the hard way ... didnt we? *grins* You will find your pulse, maybe you did long ago. Because it is there to me, and allways has. -Nadir-
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Posted by Blinded_Tiger on "Pulse" by Dancing_Monkey
- "So stop looking back; and looking in others to define. Or bloom there. I dont know, and I sure dont know anymore. So thats a place to start. To hell with security in things; we needed say that more often."
Posted by Blinded_Tiger on "Pulse" by Dancing_Monkey
- "... Deep inside Borneo, they are singing. They know that the drums of Congo are still alive in Brazil, and that a Danish writer feel them on his silent quill"
Posted by Blinded_Tiger on "Fruitless." by Dancing_Monkey
- "very interesting, the rolling timbre in these words is fascinating, you really know how to paint a portrait of detail, and convey the meaning just right."
Posted by Unknown on "a paper filled alley" by Dancing_Monkey
- "very very nice.. i read this twice in hope of decerning this piece.. i feel it longing for something it could never have... *669*"
Posted by sixsixnine on "Fruitless." by Dancing_Monkey
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