Comments by All Members
- " an embrace so close that it is a star folding into itself. theres almost anger in this, in its quiet intensity, and yet a feeling of utter randomness, its all so much juxtaposition that i feel i either cannot work this poem out, or know it so intimately,"
Posted by Anth on "A transparent roadkill charming it's way to my bed" by Dancing_Monkey
- "This piece is particularly pulling. One word draws to the next. 'to be washed away by the tide of time' Well done, sir. Indeed. -Jes"
Posted by glasshouse on "Fruitless." by Dancing_Monkey
- "I've visited your page about 3 times and, everytime I did, I read this poem and felt different things as I was reading it. And, after reading it for the fourth time, I still can't put those feelings into words. I really like this one... "
Posted by Unknown on "Gold wrapped Memory scorn" by Dancing_Monkey
- "self-actualization begins at the end of a fleshy flute...'Filling my mouth with what seemed like thousand searching lives'...this was mastered perfectly "
Posted by Unknown on "a paper filled alley" by Dancing_Monkey
- "you have a unique use of vocabulary that catches the eye and intrigues..and the images and messages it conveys are just as wonderful..you have depth my friend ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "Gold wrapped Memory scorn" by Dancing_Monkey
- "you express wisdom so flawlessly...and there is such beauty in the simplictic complexity of it...wonderfully done ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "Pulse" by Dancing_Monkey
- "i dont think anything i could say would do this justice or hasnt been said already..this was exquisite, prefectly rendered brilliance ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "Fruitless." by Dancing_Monkey
- ""In stepped a man unfrightened to put the warm city light behind him" I love the surreality of this poem, the weird imagery and the off-beat dialogue. Very well done."
Posted by Unknown on "a paper filled alley" by Dancing_Monkey
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