Comments by All Members
- "Really great rhyme scheme. You stuck to it perfectly throughout without sacrificing message or forcing a rhyme."
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Graffiti" by Ladyhawke
- "Nice to read you, Ladyhawke its been a while. I've been here before. The pain passes, the tears dry, but eventually we find that spark, that feeling. And hopefully the next time it happens the pain doesn't return, and hearts aren't broken. "
Posted by johnbevan17 on "Dysfunctional" by Ladyhawke
- "This is beautiful and endearing. I'm glad random work showed me this:)"
Posted by Unknown on "Thunder" by Ladyhawke
- "Astonishing. "Sweet" and "moonlit" is the words I would use to describe the magic of each stanza, but they're also musical. Brava!"
Posted by Nimue44 on "Nightingales" by Ladyhawke
- ":skip rocks underwater: such a striking turn of phrase, thank you for these lines... the hopefulness of dreams, the inevitability of failure and the need to always try (hopeless optimism that so wracks a poet)."
Posted by Unknown on "Jupiter Pools" by Ladyhawke
- "Life is not fair. Is it supposed to be? We need to be more careful with life, it may lead us astray. We have to be our own guides. "
Posted by Unknown on "Dysfunctional" by Ladyhawke
- "What took you so long to write another one? :) Been waiting for eons.
I haven't slept in 3 days, occasionally I slip into that weird insomniac place and I really hate it. Feels so zombie-ish.. "Can't even cry and don't even care".. :D :D Amen to that!"
Posted by Unknown on "Dysfunctional" by Ladyhawke
- "☆I am so deeply touched by this and I know of more that will consider it a cherished piece of writing. I will bring it to their attention. This tribute did not get the attention that it deserves. These are beautiful descriptions of a misunderstood and therefore unfortunately feared subculture. Goths are sensitive souls with a passion for the dramatic and romantic. Attracted to the dark and unusual. Some have dreamy, emotional eyes. I agree whole heartedly with your adjective choices. I feel my pride renewed. Thank you so much☆"
Posted by Cantara on ""Goth"" by Ladyhawke
- "Just beautiful... The melody is so gentle, so soft, the images... there's so much that can be said about them. I'll just mention the first two lines (killer start for the poem), the Pandora bit and "your dreams drip sorrow" (both the alliteration and the image behind the words). Those were my favourite, although the poem is too beautiful and organically whole to be dismembered like this."
Posted by Unknown on "An Angels Song" by Ladyhawke
- "We alway dream to be free, but truly are we? We need to be educated to read and write yet we rebel, in order to be creative we need to be educated, yet we rebel against it. Love the piece Your's truly the Renegade ;) lol"
Posted by johnbevan17 on "The True Rebellion" by Ladyhawke
- "I've been away to long. This piece is beautiful the mother nature/world/universe very powerful me thinks. I enjoy reading you "me lady""
Posted by johnbevan17 on "An Angels Song" by Ladyhawke
- "Oh so Powerful and shimmering throughout. It is a genuine honor to read you again. It's been so long I hope things are maneuvering well for you...My Ladyhawke."
Posted by Unknown on "An Angels Song" by Ladyhawke
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