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- "On Wednesday, September 8, 2010, ubiquitoussoul (476) wrote:
I like how you embody something more than human.. How you evolved an emotion into something wild but tame.. As powerful and beautiful as am ocean wave and the receding climb back into it's bed.. I can also visually see a synchronous melody these two art forms create.. The picture is rich ..contrast and vibrancy make it dream like.. A treasure.. The voice of the poem stirred me . Moved me along the current of the words..message..embattled me"
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Within my reach" by A Life Without You
- "My dear your words and your photo played a perfect melody together and stirred my soul. You gave me a peace on a night where there was none. =)"
Posted by Unknown on "Within my reach" by A Life Without You
- "I really love this photo......it has a somber feeling to it for me anyway.....if you look at the depth of the photo it seems like something calm being violently desturbed....it makes me think of many things....thank you for sharing!! Sheri"
Posted by Vampira on "Within my reach" by A Life Without You
- "really, it was the first stanza........the clarity and the poignancy and the....knowing [in a sorts] of this stanza.....caught me offguard......i know girl.s and guys like this.............simple this is. excellent and intimate."
Posted by Unknown on "A Girl," by A Life Without You
- "it's sad when something as sweet as this brings bitter thoughts to my mind. personally, I've always been more of a hands off kind of girl to a fault. Think earthquakes, I shimmy, I shake, and I always fall down, like london bridges. ~moony (pouts)"
Posted by Unknown on "Within my reach" by A Life Without You
- "stunning photo....adding the under.current of the voice, asking, simply asking for a love a life a little thing; to stay....this kind of stuff messes with my head and heart. was completely engulfed"
Posted by Unknown on "Within my reach" by A Life Without You
- "a sediment warning....your words in this speak volumes the picture was already seen just by them alone..you're truly an amazing muse...the passion in your works are unmistakable...i have been waiting to see your new scripts and it was worth it..you never disappoint..brilliant sir"
Posted by Eye of Minerva on "Within my reach" by A Life Without You
- "this perspective was well captured, i really enjoy the way you depict your atmospheres within your writes...your enticing scenery is mesmerizing with potent conveyance i am taken there every time....i like the sense of cascade in this one,,,very unique my friend..well done a brilliant flow indeed"
Posted by Eye of Minerva on "A Girl," by A Life Without You
- "there is a heaviness to this introspective depth that feels like drowning with someone's memories.. the genius of this piece is that it allows you to read it over and over again and be able to discover in yourself a variation of interpretation."
Posted by Unknown on "She said "I do" with Revolver in hand" by A Life Without You
- "I know what you mean bud, it's a sad reality, painful to witness but just like the poem i wrote "Spawn of Lies" once they start it's impossible to stop and an individual like this their very existance becomes nothing more than a big lie. Great write and thank you for sharing this with us here on DP =)"
Posted by Gray Vision on "Words on a Napkin" by A Life Without You
- "Hey umm, We've Never Talked before, but I just Loved this Poem, and the one Named "A Life Of Quiet Nights"... I also was fascinated by Your account's Name, that's why I decided to Read You and... Well, You make Honour to the Name! "Staring forms glance through windows, hoping to catch a glipse of their futures, golden bridges that will take You to the other side, if You don't quiestion why..." Reflective, Creative ^^"
Posted by Unknown on "Doorways" by A Life Without You
- "this feels so inside out; a looking dark glass piece but with such spiritual undercurrents and tones...the fish, the father, the spirit, a garden--even a fallen queen...but the message is so much more aching than that of mere spirit. it's an internal recognition and a voice of slight despairing reason.....great captivating piece."
Posted by Unknown on "Masquerading: within " by A Life Without You
- "I respect you going out of your comfort zone to take on these new styles, thats poetry in it self. Keep growing, keep expanding my friend. Great write and thank you very much for sharing =)"
Posted by Gray Vision on "need you now" by A Life Without You
- "What! Someones been doing some experimenting and with rhythm to, I love it, you certainly caught me off guard with this one and the last line... "A barrage of broken arrows shot from cupids gun," No wonder there are so many broken hearts, brilliant. This piece was a stroke of genius my friend, thank you so so much and I meant to use so twice, your eyes aren't playing tricks. Thanks again =)"
Posted by Gray Vision on "Masquerading: within " by A Life Without You
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