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- "There we go, this is what i was looking for, your right on brother, wild isn't it, you finish it - yet your mind plays on, moving threw different scenarios, as you notice your heart beat starting to race... "
Posted by A Life Without You on "Finding an End..." by A Life Without You
- "This was amazing..don't make take it any less..An instant favorite..Didn't feel it was a tease..it was just right to me..nothing more needed to be said nothing less..I get such a vivid image here..Darkness..then lids open..An old concrete building..the light.in a hue of gray and blue..shadows bent sharp around windows..Bombs..Hangings..The hidden innocent scared..still face.and the resonating words you repeat over and over again..Feeling of lost hope,despair,solitary..but int the same vein a dark tranquility lined i this final moment..Thanks for the share.."
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Finding an End..." by A Life Without You
- "ok so I decided to read this a few extra times too, and I take it back. This was way deeper then first appears when quickly read. everything was said in such a profound way. I really enjoyed this"
Posted by RubyXero on "Finding an End..." by A Life Without You
- "Its as if you want it to end, to be over, yet your not sure of the circumstances of where you are at, so maybe fighting for one last breath might be in your best interests... or it might not... either way the cry's are not helping...
lol, thx for stopping by, glad you enjoyed"
Posted by A Life Without You on "Finding an End..." by A Life Without You
- "I read this 5 times, each more slowly than the time before and every time I read it, it got deeper and better. You don't use many words here but you say SO MUCH. and that last couplet was like a slap to the face. I've been using the word "profound" a lot lately, but that couplet felt like lightning to me. despair, anguish, bone deep coldness. and within the resignation of the sentiment was the a tiny seed of something nameless that from this vantage point looks a little like peace? or maybe I'm just rambling. but I did really enjoy this read."
Posted by ebonyamore on "Finding an End..." by A Life Without You
- "some stellar images and questions; this feels forever unanswered, and conveys an unfathomable distance between a heart and a peace. .. . ."
Posted by Unknown on "Doorways" by A Life Without You
- "'Why do they bury their dead in gardens,wishing for a Sunday morning bloom'...sticks in my mind...thanks for sharing this..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "Doorways" by A Life Without You
- "Wow that was awesome. I felt like I stepped into a sci-fi movie. It was so vivid. The last verse was icing on an already delicious cake. I'm so glad you submitted this."
Posted by Musik2MyEyes on "Doorways" by A Life Without You
- "I found this to be an excellent read, and the picture it painted for me was vivid. I have lost love as well over selfish, self destructive habits so I can somewhat relate"
Posted by Unknown on "Words on a Napkin" by A Life Without You
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