Comments by All Members
- "Fantastic and fascinating. Too many wondrous parts to mention. Had me mesmerized and focused from the very first word. I found myself rushing it the first time thru, my mind rushing to get to each word. Had to read this one many times. Thank you so much for sharing this!"
Posted by jajang829 on "Woods of the Suicides" by Rowan
- "Oh yeah and the imagery in this piece and that of Dante's is very reminiscent to the work of Hieronymus Bosch an early Netherlandish painter...you should check him out..his stuff is so gruesome...very mind boggling."
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Woods of the Suicides" by Rowan
- "Ah yes Rowan..this brought me back to the very scene..I remember it like it was yesterday..Canto XIII-Circle Seven...So people do listen..Dante speaks only true wisdom :P..you suicidal will face this manacled fate..I really enjoyed your gruesome twist on one of the many great morbid scenes found in the inferno..Each stanza was unique..it remained pretty close to the original but with your own words-awesome job on that..the flaming sands...the weeping branches and those tortured suffering souls..Epic fits this poem.,Thanks for the amazing write.."
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Woods of the Suicides" by Rowan
- "'Fastening spiralling vines'...my favourite three words from this...Hell yeah...I'm goin' for a walk in the forest...love all the 'foresty' metaphors...well done"
Posted by kinkifrog on "Woods of the Suicides" by Rowan
- "Very powerful write, it's well written, every word seemed to shoot through me like hot lead, and some deadly imagery, too many good lines to name, well done, thanks for sharing."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Woods of the Suicides" by Rowan
- "haha thats what im talking about!! awesome I have a few like this of course lol"
Posted by Unknown on "Inferno" by Rowan
- "Excellent write, you mentioned all of the things wrong with this world, that last line was creepy, because I imagined kids dancing in a circle singing it, well done, the rhyme scheme was great, thanks for sharing."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "We All Die Now" by Rowan
- "Exceptional. Every line was beautifully written and the writing put me right into the story mentally. I really really enjoyed this read."
Posted by Unknown on "Sweet Dreams" by Rowan
- "This is wonderfully written Rowan...has a special significance for me as I lost my brother to the sea when we were rock fishing...couldn't comment the first time I read it...had to compose myself and come back...thanks for sharing x"
Posted by kinkifrog on "Sweet Dreams" by Rowan
- "The ending...:)..I cant even quote anything..every line was majestic..the imagery was too real..Sensual..I could feel,hear as if in your dream..Wow."
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Sweet Dreams" by Rowan
- "Bravo, well done... I think jim morrison would like this one... Loved the ring around the posey tie ins... Well written, thank-you... "
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "We All Die Now" by Rowan
- "Thanks Sinfire. I wrote this kind of fast. I fixed "plagued". Rosey and Posey were actually spelled that way in the nursery rhyme though."
Posted by Rowan on "We All Die Now" by Rowan
- "You always surprise me Rowan..This was an incredible piece..Different from what I've seen from you...The message is powerful and blunt and straight to the facts. Verse for verse you kept the flow and rhythm in pact.I also sense a poem of the day..Really Enjoyed this..Thanks and Take Care. "
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "We All Die Now" by Rowan
- "Agreed, this was an excellent piece (a few typos) but the message it carried....so true...so sad...beautiful flow. A nice write as always."
Posted by Unknown on "We All Die Now" by Rowan
- "waoh.............................this was sooooooooooooooo awesome dude.....great write all over.......this should bet he poem of the day......this gave me the chills nad a horrific frighto f what the fuck is gonna happen to us in the future.....ur poem is amazing :D"
Posted by punk mc cool on "We All Die Now" by Rowan
- "Wow, well done, thank-you... Every line was a wonderful vision into your dream... the last verse was perfect... thanks for the write... "
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Sweet Dreams" by Rowan
- "lol yea you are, i like how creative you are, i love the ending its so funny"
Posted by Unknown on "I'm not OCD" by Rowan
- "whoa, very sexxi lol, were you thinking of nano, i likes huh, wonder what else you got in that head of yours"
Posted by Unknown on "Dominatrix" by Rowan
- "Yes I do write novels. One of them is actually under contract right now. I love the supernatural and anything to do with angels and demons. "
Posted by Rowan on "Breath of Life" by Rowan
- "Wow, that was, amazing.
You're a true artist, the words your paintbrush, and empty pages, your canvas.
I have a question,
do you write stories?"
Posted by Unknown on "Breath of Life" by Rowan
- "wow! it gave me chills. im just that sick of a human being. tis morbidly delicious"
Posted by Unknown on "Dominatrix" by Rowan
- "This brought a huge smile on to my face :) It was beautiful..it sucked me right in..into this scene..I could sit behind your eyes and believe. And the last line..just sunk my heart in that warm butterfly kind of way. Amazing, Rowan."
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "In My Eyes" by Rowan
- "(chuckles)I sooooooooo get this...thanks for that...I wish I had begun writing as young as you are instead of keeping it all jammed up inside like I have done..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "I'm not OCD" by Rowan
- "what an insightful piece. I liked it...and it doesn't make me think that you're ocd when i read it. :)"
Posted by RubyXero on "I'm not OCD" by Rowan
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