Comments by All Members
- "You are Warrior, a Soldier goes to war because he thinks there is no other option, and detests battle and bloodshed, a Warrior goes to war because he knows there is no alternative, h revels in it, he enjoys his deadly work, because he is BAttle Born, and fire burned inside of him."
Posted by HeadpatSlut on "I Am Soldier" by Malcholm Dark
- "Yes, and one could only hope that such resolve brings them back to greener pastures. A good fight is a battle won, another fine tribute my friend."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "I Am Soldier" by Malcholm Dark
- "Keep your wits about you my friend, word is, she has a legion of flying monkeys at her beck and call. She might get you, and your little dog too. Also, how go you feel about the color green? Would you croak seeing yourself in the mirror? I'll stop, another humorous venture, write onward."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Harlot Of Darkness" by Malcholm Dark
- "Haha sounds like my old neighbor, lady would be stoned out of her mind, knock on my door, then try to sell rancid steaks. The decaying process must be lost on the baking mind. Nicely penned again, must be all that "inspiration"...naturally."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "I'm stoned again, naturally" by Malcholm Dark
- "I loved the metaphor between onion and man, well orchestrated. And any piece that is dedicated to our supper is well-recieved. I had a steak that I had to commemorate, next time i`ll make sure it comes with onions."
Posted by whisperingwalls on "Peel Away My Layers" by Malcholm Dark
- "haha, wake n bake, two buds, no shake. haha, the ma dealer killed me, and the freakin dogs. Reminds me of this crackhead I used to know, god would he get all paranoid, talk about wiggin out... find him walking backwards down the hall with his eyes glued to the front door... funny write, nice ring, and I don't even know the song. Good brown??? lol. This must be fiction ;) cheers."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "I'm stoned again, naturally" by Malcholm Dark
- "That is truly a great work.It's a skill to paint the mind with thought.Definitely psychopath,most true,amen."
Posted by Ortolan on "The Melding" by Malcholm Dark
- "haha, the note made me chuckle, absolutely my favorite line from a batman flick, you joker, you ;) Sounds like someone's been up to some underhand dealings, here... betrayal, a dish always eaten alone. Well expressed, not your usual; thanks for sharing and stay strong."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "A Taste Of Betrayal" by Malcholm Dark
- "Sounds like something Cesare its good has some depth to you. A slow death cause by those you once trust its painful feeling I'll have to read more from you"
Posted by myths demon on "A Taste Of Betrayal" by Malcholm Dark
- "Buried alive in each other I would think, and a slow and painful death for the betrayers reaping their black hearts' desire - each other's eternal love; born of betrayal. A match made in that darkest place where Pity averts with sidelong glance and Death comes in a whisper. Condolences mate! "
Posted by dwells on "A Taste Of Betrayal" by Malcholm Dark
- "a double betrayal of the cruelest kind... a well versed work of fiction ( I hope ) ... with a rather horrific finale...definitely a bitter aftertaste there Malcholm... write on"
Posted by kinkifrog on "A Taste Of Betrayal" by Malcholm Dark
- "There's always, what you gain opposed to what you lose, Some choose moments and forsake there loveones. I guess it's all so very human.
thanks for the write as always you give me plenty to think about."
Posted by alex herewane on "A Taste Of Betrayal" by Malcholm Dark
- "Adultery goes through such formal motions now: suspicion, hidden cameras, discovery, talk show, then divorce/murder.You cut out the middleman with this piece, straight to the bone, or rhubarb in this case. Let it be a warning to all promiscuous partakers in the rhubarb patch, write onward."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "A Taste Of Betrayal" by Malcholm Dark
- "Yes ... um.. excuse me sir... But I was wondering if maybe you'd like to get married.. Under a neon moon somewhere in Texas.. Mid July...I fuckin Love the fuck out of your work.... "
Posted by Devilish on "A Taste Of Betrayal" by Malcholm Dark
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