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- "Once you find your true love you'll feel differently. Until, then keep writing. Get the practice, because afterward you'll need the skill for the eternal burning. I hope this comment is not seen as too negative. I really enjoyed the piece."
Posted by Jonas Robinson on "In between" by Scorn Me
- "Mournful..kinda felt like I was reading a journal entry and not a poem. Seemed personal and intimate..leaving yourself bare and out on display for all to see. Props to you. Nicely done."
Posted by River Lily on "It hurts" by Scorn Me
- "All I can say is "Good for you!!". You are not binding yourself to someone who does not appreciate you for who you are. Believe me, just from reading between the lines it is evident you are a giving person...and there IS someone out there that would appreciate having someone just like you care for them. Move on...in search of that relationship that will benefit BOTH of you. Excellent piece."
Posted by Musik2MyEyes on "The twenty second letter" by Scorn Me
- "It's a terrible feeling when giving your all isn't good enough. It's nice to see you have the strength to walk away. To me, that's a happy ending. I heard a lot of truth in the first few lines. "How far are we apart/ I'm sitting beside you" This captures so well the hopelessness of detachment. Nice write."
Posted by wilted on "The twenty second letter" by Scorn Me
- "I found it sad. We can't escape the pain sometimes...no matter which road you attempt to travel...they all lead back to the same feeling."
Posted by Musik2MyEyes on "It hurts" by Scorn Me
- "Wow...Nice write...Kinda had a twist...But upon rereading this it was apparent you were looking at a mirror..Thanks for the write"
Posted by Deaths Apostle on "My true friend" by Scorn Me
- "Yes! I knew in first lines you were looking in a mirror. Because I have issues with that myself. This really hit home for me. I'm pleased you wrote this...thank you very much."
Posted by Musik2MyEyes on "My true friend" by Scorn Me
- "Boredom is an infection, thanks for curing mine for a bit. And you expressed yourself well, nice work."
Posted by Unknown on "Bored" by Scorn Me
- "well.....this is an interesting rant. One that enjoys the rain as much as you.....it is an extreme pleasure to have one of your kind here on DP:)"
Posted by maggot death on "The waiting" by Scorn Me
- "Such a grim picture... It does feel like this at times doesn't it. Nice write :)"
Posted by Unknown on "In between" by Scorn Me
- "every rose dies...everything dies...but there is birth in every seed. I know. I killed everything once....everything blooms beautifully in its own time. Don't stop tending your garden and I bet you'll be surprised,"
Posted by Narcissa on "To my dead rose" by Scorn Me
- "ok this is what happened to us. I'm a horrible gardener and i'm trying to revive it i know its impossible for a dead plant to become alive, but somehow I'm still hoping. stupid asshole :p"
Posted by Scorn Me on "To my dead rose" by Scorn Me
- "A beautiful notion. I enjoyed the idea of cloud/wind. Seems like if those two are meant to interact with each other then they will. Interesting read, thank you for sharing."
Posted by Dilated View on "Lets become ..." by Scorn Me
- "the sweetest thing is exactly that, reaching a pointe where you become one by nature, no pressure no boundaries of where the high will take you, none whatsoever, but by any means loving the light when you are the shadow, you cant have without the other. It will only make sense for love to be two different things evolving and becoming one, good read -symph-"
Posted by Rebel tiGer King on "Lets become ..." by Scorn Me
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