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Four season's promise
By Scorn Me
You promised me that
When the summer comes
We will sit down together
Watch the swans swimming
You promised me that
When the
autumn comes
We will come back together
Watch those swans leaving
You promised me that
When the winter comes
we will be
warming each other
Waiting for those swans coming
You promised
me that
When the spring comes
We will wake up together
Waving
Hello those swans returning
But you didn't keep it
I watched you and swans swimming
I watched you and swans leaving
I waited for you and swans coming
I'm waving Goodbye those swans
as you didn't return
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Copyright 2010 Scorn Me
Published on Monday, March 1, 2010.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Four season's promise"
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On Tuesday, March 2, 2010, punk mc cool
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wrote:
Nice...nice concept...i think promises r meant to be broken =P
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On Monday, March 1, 2010, Dilated View
(583) wrote:
A very sad progression. Last 5 lines wrapped this up nicely. A very lonely piece to read.
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