"Honestly , This tinges the soul. It leaves a state of calm , Mixed with distress. It shows a great level of control to writing in general and for that , I am always accepting. Good stuff. Really impressive." Posted by jaunty pill on "The Sun (a spontaneous combustion of the soul)" by A Velvet Tongue
"You include a soft , gentle relationship with your poem. An almost sexual nature that looks down upon itself. It reminds me , Sort of , Of a painting that has long been constructed , And only now , Is starting to properly speak through its colors. " Posted by jaunty pill on "The Sun (a spontaneous combustion of the soul)" by A Velvet Tongue
"A questioning piece. These are always so blossoming to me. They show an extent of design , A movement that is not often seen in all forms of poetry. And there must be some control put on each stanza. " Posted by jaunty pill on "The Sun (a spontaneous combustion of the soul)" by A Velvet Tongue
