On The Cusp of Truth...(with Jedi_Mind Fuck)

By A Velvet Tongue

thoughts stealthily slip
through cordoned lips
upon ripened hips
they tarry...

wanderlust perplexed
sync into step
sink into ears
and bury

wrongs written right
out of spite
for rights written wrong
how long must we
joust and parry

road blocks we pass
upon the cumbersome curve
kissing you deep
upon drops of pain
on eyelids..carry

verily
i speak
as my thoughts
grow weary
my pretence
a sentence
aloft
and merry

carefully, tend mundane seeds
return my dreams
a look to capture
a dozen hello's
golden and savory

words...uncouth
on the cusp of truth
proof
that like minds
can
remain aloof

Find me in darkness
tainted and tumultuous
two burrowed worms
weaving silkened scars..
Proof


{This was so very fun..your a great writer, Jedi..Thanx a million!}

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Copyright 2004 A Velvet Tongue
Published on Wednesday, May 5, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • abattoir On Thursday, September 1, 2005, abattoir (115)By person wrote:

    both minds collide beautifully. what a tease you were.sexy write

  • Loneal On Friday, March 4, 2005, Loneal (86)By person wrote:

    Haha! As much fun as Jedi had creating that, I had possibly as much fun reading it! Great read and thanx! ~L (Synthetic Darkness)

  • A former member wrote: though these are not my type of poems, I find it really neat that two darkpoets can create interesting and captivating works of art. Yay!

  • flying_fox On Thursday, May 6, 2004, flying_fox (571)By person wrote:

    ooohhh yeahhhhhh... great write, cool meter...thoroughly enjoyed this one.

  • A former member wrote: This slides so silkily past the tongue...wow. Gotta love this. Great job, you two.

  • capt_funguy On Wednesday, May 5, 2004, capt_funguy (777)By person wrote:

    very smooth .. understated eloquence ,,,, dig it ... funguy

  • Alanarchy On Wednesday, May 5, 2004, Alanarchy (1168)By person wrote:

    Those opening lines were perfect. I enjoyed this one as well. GREAT work, you guyzzzzzzz. Much love.

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