Comments by All Members
- "this is stunning. i love the title, the beautiful imagery in this.." i fled to the desert. where your heart is the setting sun, blanketing the heavens with shades of blood and fire. feminine eyes in the full moon, peering upon me." amazing. welcome to dp, i hope you stick around."
Posted by Unknown on "trying to outrun the ghost of you." by boneplate
- "Such a detailed colourful poem of risk, much more of sacrifice so to say. It gives that chill of chance you play with risk. Lovely wrote.
Sincerely,
Darkys Black"
Posted by Unknown on "unspoken messages" by boneplate
- "Beauty in this that speaks to me intimately. Risk brings such great pleasure and worth every stolen breath. =)"
Posted by Unknown on "unspoken messages" by boneplate
- "some messages are best unspoken, or maybe deeper felt? without the words i s'pose; this breathes with that wordlessness that is so imperative. pretty thoughts here."
Posted by Unknown on "unspoken messages" by boneplate
- "this does have an air of equanimity, both intoxicating and graceful...
(it does not induce slumber, your comment below made me laugh)"
Posted by Unknown on "following the moon" by boneplate
- "soft and thoughtful.... delicate and ruminative.... very nice.... so peaceful. I think you want to omit the 'e' in breathe.... if you want the noun and not the verb.... I think I'll follow the moon.... this put me in the mood for a nice melancholy sleep. thanks. "
Posted by Unknown on "following the moon" by boneplate
- "Sainted noted the pleasure of the title.. .so I guess I'll mention the last line.... gotta lil Sabbath flash there btw...could it be dreams of tomorrow or the dreams to be..... life like heaven whichever..... sounds like something I could believe in... nice work. very nice."
Posted by Unknown on "Life like heaven" by boneplate
- "and also the implication of the title: life, like heaven [could be beautiful and paradise on earth] OR life.like heaven [with two meanings:: heaven maybe too much like life itself and not quite what we imagine.....and also that heaven may be lifelike as in surreal, and dreamed, pseudo.paradise. .. . ] goodness, im getting dizzy now."
Posted by Unknown on "Life like heaven" by boneplate
- "i like the double takes and innuendos in the linebreaks. . . . God searching too; tears bring wild[flowers].....etc.. . . leaves room for peotic breath. good cup here."
Posted by Unknown on "Life like heaven" by boneplate
- "I also couldn't help but smile from reading this. There is a special connection there. You said so much...like cutting away a dimension of time...a gentle moment...holding it there for us to see. I like the way you do this. Thank you."
Posted by Musik2MyEyes on "A Beautiful Pause" by boneplate
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