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Life like heaven
By boneplate
something your soul
can only sense. the sun
can only watch
in jealousy,
stars fall to grace. fingers
feel God
searching, to touch
your beauty. tears bring wild
flowers to the flat desert
with bold and beseeching colors
breathing life like heaven
filling the world with
tomorrow’s dreams.
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Copyright 2010 boneplate
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On Friday, February 17, 2012, veingo
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wrote:
Wow. So, I'm bummed that I just now found your works. I will try to read, and keep up better in the future. Good stuff... ^V^
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A former member wrote:
Sainted noted the pleasure of the title.. .so I guess I'll mention the last line.... gotta lil Sabbath flash there btw...could it be dreams of tomorrow or the dreams to be..... life like heaven whichever..... sounds like something I could believe in... nice work. very nice.
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A former member wrote:
.this went down like a mouthful of golden sunshine...intoxicating in its beauty
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A former member wrote:
i like the double takes and innuendos in the linebreaks. . . . God searching too; tears bring wild[flowers].....etc.. . . leaves room for peotic breath. good cup here.
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A former member wrote:
and also the implication of the title: life, like heaven [could be beautiful and paradise on earth] OR life.like heaven [with two meanings:: heaven maybe too much like life itself and not quite what we imagine.....and also that heaven may be lifelike as in surreal, and dreamed, pseudo.paradise. .. . ] goodness, im getting dizzy now.
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A former member wrote:
Short yet sweet. Wonderful pictures painted in my mind. I enjoyed reading this.
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A former member wrote:
Lovely. A lot was said in this simple yet deep piece. Nice write. =)
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On Friday, April 9, 2010, ubiquitoussoul
(343) wrote:
Simple yet very effective imagery..Thanks for the share.
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On Thursday, April 8, 2010, A Life Without You
(146) wrote:
Beautiful imagery, nice piece here..
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