A Beautiful Pause

By boneplate

to be seen
by your eyes.
gazing into me.
through me.

pausing.......

only, to smile.

at my soul.....

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Copyright 2010 boneplate
Published on Sunday, April 4, 2010.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • charliebrown On Wednesday, April 21, 2010, charliebrown (22)By person wrote:

    i agree just beautiful

  • A Life Without You On Friday, April 16, 2010, A Life Without You (146)By person wrote:

    excellent, the short ones always leave the biggest impact...

  • A former member wrote: ahh..sweet simplicity..so much meaning caught in the brevity..I dig it.

  • Musik2MyEyes On Monday, April 5, 2010, Musik2MyEyes (192)By person wrote:

    I also couldn't help but smile from reading this. There is a special connection there. You said so much...like cutting away a dimension of time...a gentle moment...holding it there for us to see. I like the way you do this. Thank you.

  • Dei On Sunday, April 4, 2010, Dei (663)By person wrote:

    This was like the prettiest hiccup of a poem. So short but its lollypops and kittens babe!

  • boneplate On Thursday, April 8, 2010, boneplate (56)By person wrote:

    I loved your comment...hiccup...thank you....made me smile..

  • ubiquitoussoul On Sunday, April 4, 2010, ubiquitoussoul (343)By person wrote:

    Beautiful..just beautiful..This made me smile..Thanks for the write.

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