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unspoken messages
By boneplate
if i were able,
willing to open myself
fully, risking the elements.. ...
your touch would have been eternal.
graceful. soulful. real.
a brisk wind that would forever leave
me breathless, not caring if i took
another breath.
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Copyright 2010 boneplate
Published on Friday, May 7, 2010.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Wednesday, October 11, 2017, Just Dave
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wrote:
Opening up, being raw...exposed. So difficult. I'm finally open. It's nice. And hopefully not fleeting Nice write. JD
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A former member wrote:
Such a detailed colourful poem of risk, much more of sacrifice so to say. It gives that chill of chance you play with risk. Lovely wrote.
Sincerely,
Darkys Black
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A former member wrote:
Beauty in this that speaks to me intimately. Risk brings such great pleasure and worth every stolen breath. =)
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A former member wrote:
some messages are best unspoken, or maybe deeper felt? without the words i s'pose; this breathes with that wordlessness that is so imperative. pretty thoughts here.
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