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[take ii] Quietly and Beautifully
By boneplate
I have been here before.
my body remembers
the ache.
why did i not remain broken,
and at the bottom
waiting for
promises,
that blow in the wind
like dandelions
destroying me,
quietly
and beautifully...
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Comments on "[take ii] Quietly and Beautifully"
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On Friday, July 22, 2011, Malice In Wonderland
(987)
wrote:
Very impacting, this makes you want to sit and mull for a minute...
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On Friday, April 16, 2010, A Life Without You
(146) wrote:
intriguing... a powerful open, its as if it could stand all on its own...
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On Wednesday, March 31, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(810) wrote:
Oh the pain, beautiful pain... well done a short but powerful piece... your emotional vision was perfect... thank-you
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A former member wrote:
There was something here that touched me deeply. The need for our head to forget, but our body still remembers. Lovely lovely write. =)
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On Thursday, April 1, 2010, boneplate
(58) wrote:
I wish they would work together sometimes....and both forget....i guess without the bad. the pain..we might not know the good when it hits us....thanks
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A former member wrote:
i like the narrowing of your structure on 'take ii'. .. .. makes it impactful. dandelions destroying you; how utterly perfect.
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