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  • "tragic, but beautifully written, some misspelled words, i guess the misspelled words help to convey confusion"
    Posted by Unknown on "R A I N" by Leerer Blick Fairy
  • "*eyes widen in confusion* i dont... understand... its so... man... *piff* you cant spell silence. i think... good? im... lost... -B"
    Posted by Demosthenes on "R A I N" by Leerer Blick Fairy
  • "Wish I could do the hatred thing... but I feel hatred is the flip-side of love and don't like to think certain people have that much influence on my emotions."
    Posted by Unknown on "Hate" by Leerer Blick Fairy
  • "I disagree. You listed nationalities. That is different than being American. Americanism is an ideal. I am 100% American."
    Posted by Recycled on "American" by Leerer Blick Fairy
  • "I feel... so sad for you. The ending talking about no hope and all. I'm so sorry someone made you feel this way. Keep tuning your skills, and don't ignore the hate... get it out on paper."
    Posted by Unknown on "Hate" by Leerer Blick Fairy
  • "powerful piece... a little editing might make it even moreso. repetition can detract from impact..."
    Posted by Unknown on "Hate" by Leerer Blick Fairy
  • "keep expressing yourself this way. even if you don't like what you write, keep writing what you feel and you will get better. :)"
    Posted by Unknown on "Hate" by Leerer Blick Fairy
  • "Jo, you know damn well, we are not going to leave you alone. It would be more like, you get tired of us. Lol. Good write. *kitten*"
    Posted by Amanda Parnell on "family" by Leerer Blick Fairy
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