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the anoying agony of not knowing
By Leerer Blick Fairy
[this is a work in progress keep that in mind as u read this]
Not knowing.
Not knowing that every in the world is coming to a harsh end.
Not knowing that there is a child in a third world country some where right
at this every moment starving to death
While we sit here stuffing our faces.
What a Mc Donald's hamburger would mean to that long unloved sickly child.
It is sad that we take for grant everything we have yet we have not much.
This every fact annoys me.
I can't figure it out and that the anoying agony that i bare day in and
day out.
Not knowing.
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Copyright 2003 Leerer Blick Fairy
Published on Monday, June 30, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Sunday, July 6, 2003, Demosthenes
(155)
wrote:
*sob* -B
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A former member wrote:
i can't wait to see the finished piece. this is really good so far.
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On Friday, July 4, 2003, Leerer Blick Fairy
(16) wrote:
thanks but im not sure im going to finish...
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On Tuesday, July 1, 2003, Amanda Parnell
(57) wrote:
Keep it up Jo. Just remember, spelling. =). You're doing great though. *kitten*
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On Tuesday, July 1, 2003, Leerer Blick Fairy
(16) wrote:
mandy as i said its a work in progress. I haven't even read though it first.
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On Monday, June 30, 2003, Midnight Phoenix
(240) wrote:
This is good example of "Ignorance isn't bliss". I encourage waiting until you're finished with a piece before posting.
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On Monday, June 30, 2003, Midnight Phoenix
(240) wrote:
As for some advice for this piece, try giving examples from a national perspective and work your way down to a personal perspective. I think that would make for a good piece.
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On Monday, June 30, 2003, Leerer Blick Fairy
(16) wrote:
Thank you for u advice. I will consider it when i finish this poem.
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