Comments by All Members
- "you have a unique way of perfectly capturing pain filled emotions and holding them in your 'genie lamp' page; only to have them released on the readers who are drawn to rub the words out of their bottle and hit hard as they escape."
Posted by natalie on "Snapshots" by Rachel
- "made me cry.. i can feel how u felt because i have been there.
god bless u and ur heart.. she was truly loved.
another masterpiece."
Posted by natalie on "Beauty In Death" by Rachel
- "a brutally honest piece...this is truly how it feels...u put words to a very difficult pain.it was hard to breathe reading this.
may she be at peace.
excellent piece."
Posted by natalie on "On mothers dying." by Rachel
- "pain and love, seem to go hand in hand.
very painful to read... memories..oh.
thought provoking and very well depicted. must have been very hard for u to write this.
thanks for sharing."
Posted by natalie on "Broken Bottles" by Rachel
- ""Why take the risk with all
at stake, to make mistakes
we'll always make?
Just to call yourself
my lover?" Wow. Strong, seamless, resonant. Well done, miss."
Posted by Unknown on "Cycling Crimes." by Rachel
- "Each pause perfect, each line felt. Such a delicate flow, seeming to be without all the over the top emotions, resigned, and yet not dismissive...Wonderful write!"
Posted by unspeakable truth on "Cycling Crimes." by Rachel
- "so much pain, loss of trust. losss of everything. SO much easier to just hate and move on but our hearts dont work that way. We allow ourselves to be hurt over and over and we just keep loving.....until we hate..."
Posted by boneplate on "Broken Bottles" by Rachel
- ""Why is it that the more permanent something is
the more excruciating it becomes?" - I relate to the sentiments in this piece very much...I would give anything to have a conversation with my father and sometimes the yearning sad futility of it seems overwhelming. I have no encouragement, I guess, other than I understand how you feel and you are not alone in these thoughts. "
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "on time and mothers and lies" by Rachel
- "I'm not always good at trying to leave what sounds genuine, it all sounds the same as the last...but I really liked this, it was awesome."
Posted by Unknown on "November Rituals" by Rachel
- "That must've been pain, pain...and more pain. I'm glad to see there are strong people out there though, I wouldn't be."
Posted by Unknown on "Beauty In Death" by Rachel
- "Oh and I meant, the guy, not the poem, with the "not all bad things don't have a means to change"...oh god that make me sound like a bitch."
Posted by Unknown on "Insomniac [Love] Letters" by Rachel
- "Not all bad things don't have means to change. I love how you keep it to the point...do not get me wrong, it comes out just so right, whether you have a way pf making it that way or it's just the emotion you put inside of it."
Posted by Unknown on "Insomniac [Love] Letters" by Rachel
- "Your poems about your mother end with a little black hole. A black tunnel. It is most likely because that is how you feel inside. I'm so positive that someone out there will take you in and gave you all the love you feel your missing. You're smart, you're creative and anyone that can't see that is a moron."
Posted by Unknown on "The problem with the dead." by Rachel
- "What a brave, brave person you are, writing about something so deep and personal. I feel for you, I do. That made me a little sad, but in a good way. You take phrases that could be flooded with a million metaphors and they just come at so naturally and vague, but still beautiful. I can only imagine all the sickness you had, and believe me, I can fathom it. I'm so sorry for you."
Posted by Unknown on "On mothers dying." by Rachel
- "i have been there too , the waiting the holding of my mothers hand as she laboured silently it seemed and when the last breath wa over all i saw was the floor on which i fell to my knees because I had just lost the first woman i had ever loved. My best friend my mother someone who truley loved me unconditionally.
You are right there is no beauty in death only sorrow, "
Posted by Kittykat on "Beauty In Death" by Rachel
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