Comments by All Members
- "A very special piece. It must have been hard to write. Your wording is beautiful. I especially felt the lines (You'll see children with their mothers and hate them.Imagine yourself screaming at them to appreciate what they have. But you won't.And they won't.Just as you didn't). If only everybody knew what they had in front of them. Although sad, it is a beautiful piece"
Posted by Leith Plunkett on "On mothers dying." by Rachel
- "im 6'2 and theres not a square inch that didnt get goose bumps, ...absoloutely astounding write, ...this is so faved,...so well done"
Posted by Unknown on "On mothers dying." by Rachel
- ""One day I'll make a shrine
of broken bottles and crushed up pills
fragments of dreams and old photographs
to remind myself of the good times.
Back when it was okay to hate you." - this is an excellently written piece and I can feel and relate to the emotions you are exploring within it. I hope some of your pain has begun to heal...it takes a long time, but it eventually becomes manageable once you actually have some time to process things. Ciao, T/S
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Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Broken Bottles" by Rachel
- "I agree there is no beauty in death. Didn't see the last breath of my husband but my son & i had to sit in the same room as him for 4 1/2 hrs til cops finished their stuff. not pretty at all. think of her as she was when full of life, much better for you."
Posted by meadowlea on "Beauty In Death" by Rachel
- "Hey...I think it's very masterful...I just joined this site...but...you are a talent..and your work is very compatable with the way I'd write things...
Blessings
Runic"
Posted by Unknown on "The problem with the dead." by Rachel
- "I feel you - I helped care for someone close to me in the past and it was draining, but ultimately, for me, it served as a tribute for all they had done for me. It will stay with you for a long time, but eventually it will become a more manageable memory."
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Run-on Nightmare" by Rachel
- "My phone is on. My number is in yours. Use it. i may not be able to break through, but I can be there when you're crumbling. I'm sorry for this. :-/"
Posted by Six-Out on "The problem with the dead." by Rachel
- "had me in tears for you and your loss, and from memories of a similar time... i don't think anyone can say anything to make it 'better' but i hope in time, more cherished memories will stand out over the painful... our hearts and thoughts are with you..."
Posted by NikesRain on "The problem with the dead." by Rachel
- "That was of documentry realism at its best, extremley well done.
And at the risk of sounding basic i've found writing is the only face I wish to see in times such as those, i'm sorry... "
Posted by Unknown on "The problem with the dead." by Rachel
- "" back when it was okay to hate you" - that line knocked me in the face when I read it. You say so much with every line its hard to absorb it all at once. I love the struggle between hate/love; its powerful. And personally it surfaced one monster of a memory for me. You thread love an hate perfectly. Lovely."
Posted by Kaleidoscope_Heart on "Broken Bottles" by Rachel
- "this and i know the pain that comes with and i'm literally in tears because it's so hard. so hard. to read these words without remembering. "
Posted by dying angel on "Broken Bottles" by Rachel
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