Comments by All Members
- "Sometimes its healthy to devote days to the fuck everything mindset, well atleast thats what I tell myself sometimes..lol. Another great write, thank you."
Posted by Clydes_Bonnie on "The old young man." by Iwas
- "HOT DAMN!! Loud and happy totally contagious outburts obstructing the view of a vengeful mind.... Fucking brilliant.... "
Posted by Devilish on "I think I broke you." by Iwas
- "You put words, and so much more to paper, in a way I can only dream of... I've been dragged kicking a screaming into your world yet again, thank you..."
Posted by Malice In Wonderland on "The old young man." by Iwas
- "I really like your username. It makes me think like you have lost yourself in the present.
Escaping the pre-programmed roots just too late. I feel your pain in this piece. Great write."
Posted by lordbongo on "The Lie That Lost A Life" by Iwas
- "even though the battle seems to be almost lost...there is inspiration and hope...that last line locked it in."
Posted by natalie on "The old young man." by Iwas
- "I want to comment on this poem, Really I do, but I think I need to think about it first....But for now I will say nice write and then I will get back to you with a better thought tomorrow."
Posted by Cherry Bear on "The old young man." by Iwas
- "Wow! Impressive ... I love your writting, and i'm so glad to have came across eahother.. I get a lil excited .."
Posted by Devilish on "The old young man." by Iwas
- "Please first let me say, much respect to her and R.I.P, sweet lady.... I have been in the same situation.. And to this day I still wonder, what if... Hello there.. I can't believe I have never came across you... I'm on it now like a child to candy, for I like this taste!!!!"
Posted by Devilish on "Dust settles silent" by Iwas
- "man, this is terrible. she sounds like
she was close to you, im sure this
was the sadess day in yours and
every one in her life. the worst
fucking day ever. i know this is an
older poem of yours, but these
memories are tough to deal with im
sure. i feel you, and im sorry.
but an excellent poem. it made me
sad. thanks for sharing."
Posted by haunted on "Dust settles silent" by Iwas
- "hmm. alot going on in there. i would love to pick your brain on this one. its
great. i see you havnt posted in a
while. you should write something.
"
Posted by haunted on "Mad Man" by Iwas
- "wow, that sounds like a path that i walk
constantly, it goes up and down.its
usually down and i love hiding!
a very good poem, i love how you
share your emotions so freely.
and thats good, cause thats not hiding!"
Posted by haunted on "The old young man." by Iwas
- "i love how this poem trips back on itself. smooth as silk from bottom to top. very cleaver. i enjoyed this."
Posted by elisa on "Mad Man" by Iwas
- "This whole thing is so disjointed, but it keeps perfectly with the title and theme, so it works well that way. It's like random thoughts fleeting through the mind. "
Posted by Amaryllis on "Mad Man" by Iwas
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