Mad Man

By Iwas

Even fully unstable.
I'm still able.

I'll end you love.
This I am not above.

You can wholly trust.
Your anger's not a bust.

Hate is all I know.
dementia I carry in stow.

It truly is deliberate.
You should kill this miscreant.

The moods so thick.
Our passion's my trick.

A fool to love this man so.
Your life I shall fill with woe.

I'm about to lose control.
Welcome to your new hell hole.

Home sweet home.



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Copyright 2011 Iwas
Published on Monday, May 2, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Uninspired but I was sick of throwing paper in the trash.
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  • haunted On Wednesday, September 21, 2011, haunted (837)By person wrote:

    hmm. alot going on in there. i would love to pick your brain on this one. its great. i see you havnt posted in a while. you should write something.

  • elisa On Monday, May 2, 2011, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    i love how this poem trips back on itself. smooth as silk from bottom to top. very cleaver. i enjoyed this.

  • elisa On Monday, May 2, 2011, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    clever too;)

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