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"This sounds like the way I would feel after shooting any living thing. I personally can't do it. This was well written."
Posted by ALBATROSS on "Extended View" by Soldier Of Silence

"Heartwrenching. It's a beautiful ode. "
Posted by Unknown on "The Uncle I Never Knew" by Soldier Of Silence

"the use of imagery is really nice. "ballistic wings" is really cool..thank you."
Posted by Unknown on "Extended View" by Soldier Of Silence

"wow.I wasn't expecting that ending..."
Posted by Unknown on "Extended View" by Soldier Of Silence

"Thank you. I'm a passionate person. But one couldn't tell that by looking at me."
Posted by Soldier Of Silence on "Extended View" by Soldier Of Silence

"You seem to have a lot of emotion in all your writing. I really enjoy that, it makes you feel the poetry. This is no exception, great write. "
Posted by Mylissa on "Extended View" by Soldier Of Silence

"Wow man. This is really well written. "
Posted by Huey Lewis on "The Uncle I Never Knew" by Soldier Of Silence

"lovin the third stanza =) i liked how you describe the whole thing.. awesome."
Posted by mysterylove on "Venomous Seduction" by Soldier Of Silence

"Very fun read. I can't help but think of surfing reading this. Though that is all I usually think of during summer. Anyways, great job. "
Posted by Mylissa on "Salt Water Brain Damage" by Soldier Of Silence

"...and he is finally free of his torment...."
Posted by Unknown on "The Uncle I Never Knew" by Soldier Of Silence

"Beautiful write, and I really can relate to this. A great and merciful way of showing God, yes... ~Melodies"
Posted by melodies revisited on "The Uncle I Never Knew" by Soldier Of Silence

"hahaha! that's bitchin'. i was wondering where the hell that door jam came from!"
Posted by Huey Lewis on "Salt Water Brain Damage" by Soldier Of Silence

"well...when you put it like that I guess you could call it taking turns. My opinions are biased and I speak my mind. I had a girl like that once and she thinks she's totally the coolest person alive. She's 21, no job, no drive, and next to no talent besides slutty manipulative talent."
Posted by Unknown on "Venomous Seduction" by Soldier Of Silence

"Yeah, I noticed that after I sent it...Good looking out though. Appreciate it."
Posted by Soldier Of Silence on "Venomous Seduction" by Soldier Of Silence

"He was asking Joe Y-Lee where he got that, not you. "
Posted by Mylissa on "Venomous Seduction" by Soldier Of Silence

"ahhh I see what you mean now. I kind of had that feeling but just wanted your point of view."
Posted by Unknown on "Patriot Lies" by Soldier Of Silence

"It was more of a reference to add to the "clean" feeling you get when you think of religion. I know throughout history Christians and Catholics, hell all religions have gotten a bad rep, but the next line sealed my point. "bleed the guilty save the clean" It's kind of hard to pin point one honest group of people because I don't believe they exist. I believe that a "true" Christian would technically be a 'clean' soul. But as poetry goes, it's open for interpretation."
Posted by Soldier Of Silence on "Patriot Lies" by Soldier Of Silence

"I really enjoyed this. However, I don't really understand your christian references here. In the fifth stanza are you trying to say that Christians are the only ones who aren't guilty? Hell, half the convicts I know are christian bro."
Posted by Unknown on "Patriot Lies" by Soldier Of Silence

"gnarly. i dig this."
Posted by Huey Lewis on "Patriot Lies" by Soldier Of Silence

"What do you mean where did I get it? You ever meet that one girl who you know is just pure evil in bed? But you want her anyway because she's so incredibly sexy and so different from what you're used to? She's a human black widow...spinning her web to catch and devour her mate. But her web is lust and seduction."
Posted by Soldier Of Silence on "Venomous Seduction" by Soldier Of Silence

"I like the ending...it's always good to switch it up."
Posted by Unknown on "Venomous Seduction" by Soldier Of Silence

"sometimes what we want seems so simple, but is still just out of reach...welcome to DP :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Displaced Rage" by Soldier Of Silence

"Despite the verbose wording, I found this quite enjoyable and relatable. Nice Write!"
Posted by Spiral Downward on "Tattered Soldier" by Soldier Of Silence

"...where the hell did you get that...? at the most, it looks like taking turns, which, at least by my viewpoint -- drunk as it may be -- is not at either one's expense..."
Posted by SilentStalker on "Venomous Seduction" by Soldier Of Silence

"WOW this is deep, I am assuming from personal experience due to your category. Well done as it drives home the feelings you felt during this hard time. Beautiful..."
Posted by Mylissa on "Tattered Soldier" by Soldier Of Silence

"I love it, though if you read most my poetry it is simply about seduction, obsession and the feeling of submission so I suppose I am bias. I enjoyed the emotion, it was raw, beautifully done...welcome to DP. "
Posted by Mylissa on "Venomous Seduction" by Soldier Of Silence

"I was enthrawled by this poem. Each line formed more seduction and lace for the intricate web weaved by this story. Very nice, Soldier. ~Melodies"
Posted by melodies revisited on "Venomous Seduction" by Soldier Of Silence

"i didnt like this at all. Reminds me of people who think they're cool at other people's expense."
Posted by Unknown on "Venomous Seduction" by Soldier Of Silence

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