Extended View
By Soldier Of Silence
The predator lies and waits,
Body still on the quiet ground,
Barely moving his eyes,
As he scans the scenery before him.
He catches a fleeting glimpse,
Of his victim,
As he moves about the grounds,
Like rats in a maze.
His instrument of death,
Secured firmly in his hands,
Range, elevation, windage,
All accounted for.
The weapon feels familiar,
In the hands of this professional,
As he reacquaints himself,
And preps his shot.
The stock is solid,
Pistol grip slightly course,
As he rotates the bolt,
And locks it into place.
An extended view,
Into the soul of the damned,
As he peers through,
His high powered scope.
Poised for the shot,
Finger extends to the trigger,
Thumbing the safety,
Slowing his pulse.
He asks for permission,
And receives his response,
To deliver his message,
On ballistic wings.
A crack of thunder,
Follows a vapor trail,
The message delivered,
His target crumbles.
Silence returns,
To this barren land,
As a profound guilt,
Overwhelms his heart.
He was only a kid,
And this was his first,
His dad pats him on his back,
Let’s go home son.
Comments on "Extended View"
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On Monday, May 11, 2009, ALBATROSS
(194) wrote:
This sounds like the way I would feel after shooting any living thing. I personally can't do it. This was well written.
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A former member wrote:
the use of imagery is really nice. "ballistic wings" is really cool..thank you.
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A former member wrote:
wow.I wasn't expecting that ending...
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On Monday, May 11, 2009, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
You seem to have a lot of emotion in all your writing. I really enjoy that, it makes you feel the poetry. This is no exception, great write.
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On Monday, May 11, 2009, Soldier Of Silence
(42) wrote:
Thank you. I'm a passionate person. But one couldn't tell that by looking at me.