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Venomous Seduction
By Soldier Of Silence
My arrogance dances across my lips,
In the form of a grin,
Confidence in the shoulders,
A gleam in my eye.
Seduction on your mind,
Glowing eyes,
Razorblade teeth,
In a dangerous smile.
Curves of an Angel,
Horns of a Devil,
Sex in your movements,
Rape on your mind.
Your arms melt me,
Your words entice me,
Your voice captures me,
I’m caught in your venomous seduction.
Bloody lips,
Sweaty bodies,
Nail marked skin,
I’m trapped in your lust.
Screams boil in my veins,
Acid burns through my heart,
Muscles numb,
No fight left in me.
An intricate web you’ve spun,
I’m prey and you,
Predator.
My turn.
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© 2009 Soldier Of Silence
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On Sunday, May 10, 2009, mysterylove
(99)
wrote:
lovin the third stanza =) i liked how you describe the whole thing.. awesome.
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A former member wrote:
I like the ending...it's always good to switch it up.
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On Saturday, May 9, 2009, Mylissa
(845) wrote:
I love it, though if you read most my poetry it is simply about seduction, obsession and the feeling of submission so I suppose I am bias. I enjoyed the emotion, it was raw, beautifully done...welcome to DP.
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On Saturday, May 9, 2009, melodies revisited
(30) wrote:
I was enthrawled by this poem. Each line formed more seduction and lace for the intricate web weaved by this story. Very nice, Soldier. ~Melodies
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A former member wrote:
i didnt like this at all. Reminds me of people who think they're cool at other people's expense.
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On Saturday, May 9, 2009, SilentStalker
(1066) wrote:
...where the hell did you get that...? at the most, it looks like taking turns, which, at least by my viewpoint -- drunk as it may be -- is not at either one's expense...
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On Sunday, May 10, 2009, Soldier Of Silence
(42) wrote:
What do you mean where did I get it? You ever meet that one girl who you know is just pure evil in bed? But you want her anyway because she's so incredibly sexy and so different from what you're used to? She's a human black widow...spinning her web to catch and devour her mate. But her web is lust and seduction.
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On Sunday, May 10, 2009, Mylissa
(845) wrote:
He was asking Joe Y-Lee where he got that, not you.
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On Sunday, May 10, 2009, Soldier Of Silence
(42) wrote:
Yeah, I noticed that after I sent it...Good looking out though. Appreciate it.
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A former member wrote:
well...when you put it like that I guess you could call it taking turns. My opinions are biased and I speak my mind. I had a girl like that once and she thinks she's totally the coolest person alive. She's 21, no job, no drive, and next to no talent besides slutty manipulative talent.
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