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  • "This is quite a conundrum of a piece. It is a flip flop of a teasing thought. The last two lines just lingered in my mind and I swear I could taste them. A weightless piece with a hard hit, a heavy load on the mind. Profundity in a small, deceiving box. A masterpiece, Sir."
    Posted by Amaryllis on "With All the Weight of Nothingness" by Riven Waker
  • "yes I see Your point... sometimes I reach for phantom words which spring to mind but don't really exist... and I am forced to approximate them with real words which do not quite capture the sublime (for lack of a better word lol) essence as well"
    Posted by Riven Waker on "With All the Weight of Nothingness" by Riven Waker
  • "but my original thought was that the feather represented the 'burden' of writing...and that some inspiration that has captured your attention would be lost if you tried to convey it with words...this is something I do constantly...while trying to record or remember...I lose the train of thought...:)"
    Posted by kinkifrog on "With All the Weight of Nothingness" by Riven Waker
  • "I turned this around in my mind for quite some time and came up with so many possibilities...but the overriding one is a sense of having lost something...such as an inspiration or love which though once uplifting...is now forgotten and lays heavy on your mind...thank you for this...so many meanings from so few words... :)"
    Posted by kinkifrog on "With All the Weight of Nothingness" by Riven Waker
  • "This piece has a sinister magnetism and something about the breathing space and the realm between mirrors reminded me of a shaman philosophy about opening gates to other dimensions. Oh, I really like this intricacy of abstract visions and dark esoterica. Wonderful write! "
    Posted by The Coloured Cello on "Cherished Vessel" by Riven Waker
  • "so brutal...vicious... and technical, i like how it ends abruptly..these words as a hymn to a radiant dark, valed by a glow...a hellish vision put brilliantly...absolutely sick man \m/....reverance "
    Posted by Eye of Minerva on "The Winged Serpent Alights" by Riven Waker
  • "Wow, the imagery here just protrudes into eternity. Just loved the last line, 'a deepening storm'.. as if creates the beginning of a legend."
    Posted by tindomerel on "Desire Is Eternal" by Riven Waker
  • "Quite atmospheric. I read this while listening to "Screams of Suicide" by Valefor. It was quite the experience."
    Posted by Unknown on "These Woods" by Riven Waker
  • "I just realized that I have read like 6 or 7 of your stuff and haven't left a comment or voted...too excited to read the next one. Interesting thoughts, wonderfully told..."
    Posted by DarkDruidess on "The Lunatic Changeling" by Riven Waker
  • "so metal..\m/..your style always intrigues me such dark unwinding path way within each one..always riveting and striking...the emphasis placed in certain mannerisms and passages are truly brilliant potions of metal, and your words are always astonishing and savory..a pleasure to read such a symphonic thriller...fucking amazing as usual..reverence.\m/"
    Posted by Eye of Minerva on "Mormo the Alien Satan is Lord" by Riven Waker
  • "a killer piece within itself, paints a very intriguing story, but the last four lines man... were nothing short of pure brilliance. "
    Posted by T-Nothing on "To Become a God" by Riven Waker
  • "intense and vicious..would make for amazing lyrics...such an ascending dark vibe..majestic and riveting..the opus that would encompass this brilliance would be extremely technical and colossal atmospheric tone...i would buy this art astounding man...reverence..\m/"
    Posted by Eye of Minerva on "Thirteen Eternities of Solitude" by Riven Waker
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