Comments by All Members
- "That was a really amazing write, when I figured out some of the words meaning lol, truly a dark write, thanks for sharing."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Dark Solace" by Riven Waker
- "innocence is over-rated. give me someone who has lived, made mistakes...and is better for it. regret only makes us dwell on a past we can not change. always look towards the future and know that anyone who matters will accept you scars and all ~k"
Posted by Sin on "Innocence Reborn" by Riven Waker
- "Huh.... well, I like the badass fantasy legendary feel, but the words were so emotionless... I felt like I was reading from a ledger of the damned.... which, I'm thinkin, may be just the tone you were lookin for... nice right... stranger eons death may die... METALLICA haha... but really stolen from Death be not Proud by John Donne."
Posted by Unknown on "Bailiwick of Legerdemain 4: When a Death Shall Die" by Riven Waker
- "I could hear demons stirring as I read these words.... I can feel the conquering drums beating the war cries as we wage against the gates of Eden. It shall be ours! nice write... I got all wrapped up in it, thanks."
Posted by Unknown on "An Invocation" by Riven Waker
- ""To brave and break across thet
Monolithic windowpane was my
Only answer" My god man evey visual you create throughout your works that are overflowing with visuals just astound me. I'm really curious where this series is going to end up. Captivating would be an understatement. Your works play like a documentary in my mind. Write on sir."
Posted by Dilated View on "Bailiwick of Legerdemain 3: The Skull of Anthraxus" by Riven Waker
- "Powerful and post-apocalyptic feel. As usual vivid visuals throughout. I really liked the way you ended it in the last two lines. Left me wondering what would happen next. Cool man."
Posted by Dilated View on "The Dream Descent" by Riven Waker
- ""Take me by the clawed wing along the
Edges like some nightshade make me
Forget all the horrid inane thoughts and dreams" these lines especially but the overall piece as well gave me visions of being torn apart and finding rebirth and enlightenment instead of death. I suppose we pay the heaviest prices for the greatest treasures. May not be what you intended but I enjoyed this all the same :)"
Posted by Dilated View on "The Consummation of Minds' Reaches" by Riven Waker
- "Damn man. I'm not sure I know the significance of the 13 eternities but this felt like being reborn through solitude and finding the truths that set us free and allow us to shape the world. Nicely written, powerful stuff."
Posted by Dilated View on "Thirteen Eternities of Solitude" by Riven Waker
- "I thought the structure was very interesting the upper section looked very orb-like. Once again you paint such an immense amount of imagery with each line. Much enjoyed :)"
Posted by Dilated View on "The Orb of Blood" by Riven Waker
- "The cruel repetition at the end was hypnotic. Like a threat to anyone who makes the mistake of getting in the way. Vivid visuals throughout. Gracias :p"
Posted by Dilated View on "These Woods" by Riven Waker
- "I believe I am slowy taking a grasp on your work...I know the feeling...It's empowering to know you can escape from someone elses control over you"
Posted by Deaths Apostle on "Dark Solace" by Riven Waker
- "I'm really digging your other worldly style,man.You always take me far into the depths of my own imagination.The second verse really cooked!"
Posted by Honey on "An Invocation" by Riven Waker
- ""I have shed more than blood
In the battles my craven heart braves
I would still rather kill than die
But who wouldn't" Intense. I have a hard time expressing what exactly it is I like about your works but know that they are appreciated. You use a style of imagery that only you could own and I can dig it. Much enjoyed."
Posted by Dilated View on "Eyes of the Dragon" by Riven Waker
- "Bold statements, must be why you used all caps, for to scream these things as dark as they are. brilliantly written. Jade"
Posted by Lydia Jade on "They Are" by Riven Waker
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