Comments by All Members
- "Wonderful! and ohh damn ! hahaha! ya better just go back to bed and start over! the elves were playin' tricks! haha great write , i have related to this before (smiling)loved it !"
Posted by Unknown on "One of those daze" by Ashteroth
- "AWWW so beautiful and heartfelt ,smooth as silk ,a wonderful message for everyone ,thank you very much for the read:) you are great!"
Posted by Unknown on "A shared burden..." by Ashteroth
- "When it comes to writing romance, it really is hard not to say something not said before, it's all in the manner it's presented and you got that right here. I enjoyed the read, write on."
Posted by Echoes of Orpheus on "Sweet dreams" by Ashteroth
- "a self analysis of life from inside yourself,..drawing from a place that often gets tarnished by the world we've made,...if only to hold on to what we first knew,...a calling from within."
Posted by Unknown on "Collective conscious" by Ashteroth
- "Thanx again everyone. Yeah bit cliche but isn't every story eventually in some way. Just so happens that sleeping beauty was one of my fave stories when I was a kid. And the song once upon a dream, I was the kind dag that sorta believed it might turn out that way. ;-)"
Posted by Ashteroth on "Sweet dreams" by Ashteroth
- "I like the way this feels. It is simply honest without amplifying emotions or making too much of anything. I like it. "
Posted by sixsixnine on "Sweet dreams" by Ashteroth
- "I thought it was quite lovely, ... if only we could wish our daydreams to life:) ...but sometimes....we can if we never stop reaching for what we want. ~Rain"
Posted by Unknown on "Sweet dreams" by Ashteroth
- "all in all, it's surprising in a good sense, as it's an attempt outside of your normal works/style, and that means you're stretching/growing/progressing! *applause*"
Posted by Sketso on "Sweet dreams" by Ashteroth
- "dare I say... and no offense is intended at all... it hit me like a wheelbarrel full of cliche bricks. The thoughts were nice, and I doubt anyone would claim theft, as the thoughts are pretty much universally felt. The first 2 stanzas were nicely done, although the 2nd one destroyed my hopes for an atypical rhyme scheme. I was elated thinking you were gonna run with an "aaba ccbc" scheme there for a second. ;) That's just me though. The ending provided a nice twist, ensuring the write as a whole belongs on a dark poetry site, killing all the happy happy joy thoughts with the fact that it was all just daydreaming."
Posted by Sketso on "Sweet dreams" by Ashteroth
